May
17th
2013
Alright, big problem... · 3:49am May 17th, 2013
I need some counseling on if i should go through with my next chapter in spike's journey. it's a risky move, but i can avoid the chapter in its entirety and replace it with a quick scene. I imagine that this image represents whats going on in my head D:
maybe i just need a nap, 
but if someone wants to give me advice and hopefully wont spoil the next chapter want to listen, then drop a comment or send me a personal message.
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That Drunk Pony · 561 views
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You can post a chapter about Pinkie being Canterlot.
Derpy Hooves, Doctor Hooves, Cranky Doodle, Iron Will,
or Zecora can somehow break Spike's fall.
The reason Zecora is: Cloudsdale is far from the Everfree forest.
Doctor Hooves: Just got back from one of his 'adventures.'
Iron Will and/or Cranky Doodle: Being nomadic travelers.
Derpy: Making her local rounds delivering mail.
P.s. I am certain you can do it.
Well, I would love to see another chapter of this story. I think maybe Spike could be falling and when he lands in the water, he could pull himself to safety maybe before passing out. And when he wakes up, just maybe he could look up at all everypony from The Mane Six, to those who have become his new friends along his journey. Please though, don't end this story, I love it so much and I just want the best to happen for Spike.
I'll listen
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Hmm for the suggestions you gave, it is something I may use in pieces later on, but for now I wonder about my current plans.
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Hmm, maybe he can meet a seapony or something, or maybe he can be saved by Gilda or maybe Trixie or Cranky Doodle Donkey....Trixie is a travelling showmare, Gilda and Cranky went AWOL last time we saw them, so you never know, unless Cranky is living with Mutilda from now on or something like that... Also, about the nap, yeah, maybe you do need a nap....