News on "In Search Of Wings 2.0"

For those who saw my rough try at "In Search Of Wings" the last time. I did take it down to find a proofreader to help with my black luster first two chapters. Since then I have found one proofreader and worked on a rough outline for the next few chapters. However, in chapter three we meet a character that will [spoiler kinda] show up down the line in another city/town. [end spoiler] It is not really a big spoiler, but, anyway I am having a hard time writing the character the way I want to. After every try, I just feel like the first dialog between the character and Slash only goes to state: Slash is well known is some groups; the character comes off as a prick; and feels like I am forcing the reader to hold my hand so I can lead them through the dialog.

Now you maybe asking why that would delay the re-post of the story. Well the reason is I want to add something more to what the very few of you who read the first draft got to read. I feel that is I simply re-post the first two chapters, though they have been slightly expanded, still seems like a cheap attempt to rush it out the Google doc.

While I can be a lazy, lazy person, I am not someone who does anything with a hint of being cheap. If I am going to go out of my way to write something. You better believe that I will put my heart into it. Since I am mainly a emotional poetic who only writes when a strong emotion hits me. I find it disrespectful to you the reader if I do not do the same in any of my other work. Thus, the delay until I can work out the small kink in how I write this character. Please enjoy a Mane6 cookie.

~Hearn