My best work is from the 12th grade.

My writing teacher gave her students a project over the play Macbeth. I mostly liked one thing about the project:
She asked us to pick a character and an scene, and analyze things about them at that moment in the story. That wasn't such a big deal by itself, but she added (addition to several other things) that we could use some kind of (non-Macbeth) media to compare them with. I had picked Macbeth in scene three. By the end of class, I had the PERFECT idea to run with. By the time I got home, it was almost compleated in my mind. All I had left to do, was look up the lyrics to Rob Zombie's Dragula. While I listened to the song, I didn't hear everything right, but using the actual words or not, I was able to do the comparison.

I did so well, my teacher asked if she could use it as an example for others to learn form.

Here it is.
To simplify things, I'm going to color code.
Bold and/or black text is the lyrics
Orange is for the words being looked at in the lyrics
Blue is for what I heard
Red is for how things relate

Dead I am the one, Exterminating son
Macbeth wishes to kill the princes and Freance
Slipping through the trees, strangling the breeze
the wood form the prophecy
Dead I am the sky, watching angels cry
While they slowly turn, conquering the worm worms
this is Macbeth’s desire to be king and his slow path to it

Dig through the ditches, witches
And burn through the witches
the witches that guide Macbeth to his temptation
I slam in the back of my of
Dragula
Symbol of death and blood, what Macbeth has too much of

Dig through the ditches, witches
And burn through the witches
I slam in the back of my of
Dragula

Dead I am the pool, spreading from the fool fools
I think that this could be used as a thing for his thoughts of others place on the throne
Weak and want you need, nowhere as you bleed watch & bleed
Both a symbol of Macbeth’s weakness for not being able to be around as his victims are killed, and then just the fact that he isn’t there for the merders
Dead I am the rat, feast upon the cat
Macbeth is looking for things too high in his stature or class
Tender is the fur, dying as you purr burn
this could be one for when Macbeth takes, and wish to continue to with with taking from other possible kings

Dig through the ditches, witches
And burn through the witches
I slam in the back of my of
Dragula

Dig through the ditches, witches
And burn through the witches
I slam in the back of my of
Dragula

Do it baby, Do it baby
Do it baby, Do it baby
Burn like an animal

Dead I am the life, dig into the skin
This is Macbeth’s nightmares
Knuckle crack the bone, 21 to win Don't & bout
Dead I am the dog, hound of hell you cry may
Devil on your back, I can never die
those last two lines are referring to the witches prophecy of him not dieing easily

Dig through the ditches, witches
And burn through the witches
I slam in the back of my of
Dragula

Dig through the ditches, witches
And burn through the witches
I slam in the back of my of
Dragula

Do it baby, Do it baby
Do it baby, Do it baby
Burn like an animal

Dig through the ditches, witches
And burn through the witches
I slam in the back of my of
Dragula

Dig through the ditches, witches
And burn through the witches
I slam in the back of my of
Dragula

Dig through the ditches, witches
And burn through the witches
I slam in the back of my of
Dragula
And finally the song type itself fits his change in attitude towards things.

I changed little and this is (more or less) the condensed version. The full version has three sections: lyrics, what I heard, and how it all fits.
Let me know what you think of this old work of mine.