Never Doing That Again

Finished Chapter Five late last night and then I proceeded to ignore one of my biggest rules of writing: I put it straight up without giving it a day to sit so I could remove myself slightly from it and thus edit it better. I'm seeing all the mistakes now and it reads horribly. I'll go through and put up an improved copy this week as soon as possible. Sorry to all the readers and thanks to Squeaky Toy for catching the biggest mistake.