Revisions and Rewrites - Update · 3:42am Mar 26th, 2013
I've finished editing the story just a bit. I've rewritten a lot of Chapter 1, Chapter 2, and added some to Chapter 10. I also had to rewrite the entire bit about alchemy in Chapter 8, and I made a very minor tweak to Chapter 10 (nothing worth re-reading unless you just really want to). The important changes are to the first two chapters, though I added an attempt at making the short fight in Chapter 10 a bit more epic. I ended up adding somewhere around 1,750 words to the story with these changes. I hope they make things a bit better.