What are Your Thoughts?

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Alright, I need critique. And I need it...effective immediately! People are disliking this story and I have no idea why that is, but if they're doing it, then their either trolls or something's not right. I know the first couple of chapters are not as thrilling as the most recent ones, but I have promised revision of this story in the future and I don't intentionally break my promises. So, my fellow and faithful readers, give me some critique so far. No story is perfect, no writer is perfect, nothing is perfect.

But what helps me keep writing is critique. Every writer is a masochist whether he/she knows it or not. We like our blood, sweat and tears spent on the stories we right to be criticized! Sure, some authors may react with anger, but not I! I will accept your ideas and thoughts, fusing them with my own in order to better the story for everyone's enjoyment! Which of course brings us to the next section.

Haters. Ugh!

Do not leave half-assed comments like, "This story sucks and there are many blatant mistakes." Number 1, this is not criticism...this is hating. Please keep comments like this out of the comment section. If you have nothing productive to say, then don't say anything at all. This is not a site where you can make an account and trash someone's talent in writing. You want to hate on something, find other haters and hate on them. I don't need it, and neither do other authors.

Number 2, write your own story and one-up me. If you don't like the way I'm writing, I'll happily mail you the plot and we'll see who writes it better. A story depends heavily on the one who can conceptualize it in their mind and then transform it into words. You will be hard pressed in writing a story I came up with, since you weren't the one to think of it.

For all others, continue to enjoy the story and brony on. Love and Tolerance to all, and to all a good night!