Luna? Again? Again.

Yes. That Luna thing i mentioned last time. that silly short thing. And how i said i probably wouldn't expand on the thing.

Turns out i'm a Writer and a Liar.
Just looking for some Critiques, comments, ideas, etc before I decide to commit 110%
https://docs.google.com/document/d/17IfuAUN1IbYThf07rQT_uRRuZB-lOncqVMMZ54N6Llw/edit?usp=sharing

Also looking forward to starting up the next update of Heart of Winter here soon. Especially get a bit of inspiration from reading a Russain character in a novel series I just picked up. Anyways

Do Svidaniya

Dr.Shisno

Comments

[Magus of Chronicles]

Well now I'm even more interested in what's happening. So many questions; so little information. I smell potential.

[Spacecowboy]

FULL STEAM AHEAD, CAPTAIN!

It looks interesting enough, the only thing I've gathered from this and the prior posting is a romance between Ray and Luna (whoever Ray is), and I'm ALWAYS all for Luna getting some loving.

Is this an independent story, or does it tie in with your universe stories? Either way, I say go for it.