A blog about a single comment? UPDATE 3/19/13 · 11:27am Mar 18th, 2013
UPDATE: The author of the fic PMed me and said that THEY want to have my entire comment become an added deleted scene/bonus content at the end for the fic! HOLY JEEPERS!
Yes well its a LONG comment I wrote.
BACKSTORY: There's this REALLY GOOD, and INTERESTING fic I've been reading titled : THE MAN WITH TWO NAMES
A human in Equestria story, about a man who was delusional and starving as he exited the Everfree and in a fit of survival, killed one of Fluttershy's Chickens. This unfortunately makes him the social pariah of the entire town. And MAN do they hate this guys guts. Worst of all, the main six act mostly in character (With a little bit more on the fear side) Which is the REAL scarey part. Twilight act's scientific, cold a calculating, Rainbow dash acts fiercely loyal to her friends and scrutinizes his every move, Rarity believes him to be nothing more then a slobbering mangy beast, Fluttershy is deathly afraid of him, and Pinkie spreads childish and bold face lies about him, and AppleJack remains stuck in her opinion refusing to give the guy even a remote chance of redemption.
Through the story you come to hate the ponies more and more and feel sorry for the guy as he just trys to roll with the punches the best he can.
Honestly its a well written story that I love to hate.
however one complaint, the dude is a pussy. Grow a spine and throw some of that shit back in their face man!
So I wrote this LONG over 700 word comment.
So what do you guys think of my short story addition?
929003
Poo on you. I worked hard on that. XP
929007
Just read it you nark. And stop commenting about NOT reading something I wrote.
It's just rude.
Wow.....What A Coincidence....I Was Reading It And Saw A Notification About It........What A World,What A World...
Just wow, that was pretty great, I havent read the fic but if its what you say it is, then your addition would make a pretty good change.
After Reading About 320 Something Words My Mind Was Completely Put Into "Reading Chapter" Mode,Even Though It Was A Comment..........
Official Reaction:
I Always Liked The Idea Of A Timid/Weak Character Have A Sudden Outburst And Completely Has Facts And Evidence To Prove His/Her Statements.
The Sentence He Said Before Leaving Twilight Was Actually Has A Pretty Good Feel With It.Very Powerful Sentence And Beautifully Executed.Good Show,My Friend,Good Show.
I Actually Hunger For More......Just Like A Pet.....Give Him/Her Food And He/She Will Just Be More Hungry.
I Just Want To Point Out That I Kinda.....Well......(I Hate Myself Just By Saying This
)When I Read The Part Where He Is Shutting Up Twilight......I Kinda Felt Like He Pushing His Luck Trying To Shut Her Up,Like When He Said"SHUT UP!I'M TALKING" I Felt Like He Was Really Ignoring Her Statements And Goes Out Of His Way To Just Say That,(Still Hating Myself From Saying This
)I Think I Would Be Nicer If He Just Cut Her Of Like,
Twilight:You Could Be-
Mr.Walker:WHAT!I Could Be What Exactly!?
But That's Just My Opinion.(Just Kill Me Already
)
I Think Of It As A Tiny Rare Rose That Grew On A Cliff And Cannot Grow Anymore Without Attention,Because It Was Great But Has Some Of It's "Thorns".
All-In-All,A Cute/Monstrous(Cute Because Of Comparing The Number Of Words To A Regular Chapter[It's Like A Chapter For Me],And Monstrous Because Of The Number Of Words Compared To A Regular Comment) Great Side/Alternate/Etc. Story
THIS IS GETTING OUTA HAND!!!!!! I HAVE TO MANY STORIES!!!! giasjdhfilasdghfiluasdgfusdjhfljasdguiajdahksugfiuasdhgfguyghvghhjbhj
...no really... I have over 100 stories in my "read latter" file and then about 50 or in favs... thankfully some favs are done...
save me...
929260
Nope.
You're doomed.
XD
929260 I Have About 20 Tabs On Google Chrome And Each One Of Them Has A Different Story,So I Kinda Know How That Feels Bro:brohug:
929302 I HAVE SCHOOL STUFF TO DOOOOO!!!
I'ma die...
929303 I'ma DIE!!!! I HAVE SCHOOL WORK TO DO!!!
...seriously... I never would have thought that I'd have had problems with school because of READING...
929156
Why... why are you capitalising the first letter of every word?
It was very nice and satisfying, but I'm betting that a pony's going to end up standing up for him at the end. There's already a couple of candidates out there for ponies who could potentially stand up for them, and I do feel that if the guy does have a breakdown the ponies would run him out (just my opinion, it very well could not be).
Actually, I kinda think your comment was a little too satisfying. I don't feel like it fits the mood of the story, and at that the spine kinda seemed to come out of nowhere. I want to see the scene where Fluttershy beat up Jerry for killing the chicken so I can understand how much he truly is afraid of her.
But yeah, it's a beautiful story and I haven't quite seen any HiE fic like this before.
929425........You Are Currently The Eighth Person To Tell Me This
(No,Seriously,Congratulations :3)
Okay,Ummm.....I Don't Really Know......It's An Instinct I Developed Through The Years.......
930267
Fair enough, I guess.
930396
929386 I Actually Excelled At Math......While I Learn New Words From Reading MLP Fics..........My Brain Is Weird.......I Should Be At Least Have A Higher Grade In English Than In Math......But Fate And Destiny Is Like"NOPE"
930445 ... -Eye twitch- ...damn... now I've gotta go check those out...
930955 Check What Out?
931039 ...
when I read them this morning I was thinking those were other stories... my awake brain though is telling me otherwise 
931756 Brains Ate Weird.....They Think Of Creepy Things But Also Thoughtful Ones....
931821 ...very true
932033 Yes.....I Completely Agree With Your Statement