IT'S HAPPENING! · 11:48pm Mar 13th, 2013
I am finally beginning to re-edit my old chapters as I work on my new chapter. I have 4500 words done on Chapter 4 Part 2, and I've just finished and published a re-edited Chapter 1.
I would like to thank fellow user/writer SmutAnon for his help in reviewing both my old and new chapters. He's helped me realize that one of my key weaknesses is my love of superfluous language, or what I like to call the "Asgardian Voice". Flowery, overblown, bloated; I need to tone it down and the vastly reduced wordcount (and hopefully better flow) of Chapter 1 should be a sign that I've succeeded. Maybe. Possibly. God I hope so.
More to come. My mojo is back. Let's hope it doesn't leave me again.
Re-Edited Chapter Dates:
Chapter 1: 13/03/13
Chapter 2: 28/03/13
Chapter 3: 25/04/13
Chapter 4 Part 1: 01/05/13
Chapter 4 Part 2: 10/05/13
