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Broadway Sweetie Belle


Success is 10% luck, 20% skill, 15% concentrated power of will, 5% pleasure, and 50% pain.

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  • 432 weeks
    Hey, you remember me?

    If you don't, don't worry, I probably won't be around much longer.

    Okay, before I go any further, I just want to say that this blog is going to contain more vulgar language than I usually use. Because there's a lot of steam I need to let out.

    Now the first thing I wanted to address is that fimfiction has Fucked me up big time!

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  • 458 weeks
    BIG NEWS! BRONYCON EXPERIENCE! AND UPDATE!

    It's been awhile since I made a real important announcement, or any type of progress going on. But this one is a duzy.

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  • 463 weeks
    New group

    The fan promotion group is now open for all fans of anyone!

    You have someone you thinks needs more attention? This is the place to tell everyone how great that person is.

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  • 466 weeks
    Mermaid edition

    The amount of work that someone went through to make these is astounding! Whether you like Disney or not, you got to give this person credit.





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  • 468 weeks
    A quote from Siddhartha Gautama (The Buddha) when faced with temptation

    Pleasure is brief as a flash of lightning
    Or like an autumn shower, only for a moment....
    Why should I then covet the pleasures you speak of?
    I see your bodies are full of all impurity:
    Birth and death, sickness and age are yours.
    I seek the highest prize, hard to attain by men—
    The true and constant wisdom of the wise.

    Have this, because Nirvana.

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Mar
9th
2013

Followers, lend me your ears... or your attention. · 8:15pm Mar 9th, 2013

What is it that makes a story shine? That is the magical question that many authors seek.

For me, I am going to ask the people. (which is you) From the best of your knowledge, what and/or how is the best way to make a good story come to life? What is it that some stories lack? (my stories to be specific)

Go wild in the comments if you'd like.

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Comments ( 8 )

believable characters, good dialogue, good non-dialogue exposition, interesting scenarios... and for the love of Derpy, get a damn proof-reader.

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Yes, thank you. :twilightsmile:

Was that last part referring me? :twilightblush:

Comment posted by Broadway Sweetie Belle deleted Mar 9th, 2013

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Yes, I said to go wild in the comments so... i1.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/original/000/390/465/16e.gif

I accidentally sent this to myself so I don't think you got this.:unsuresweetie:

To me, I can hate a story but love it based on the writing style.
I like Skyrim, but the story line is just plain awful...
The dialogue too...

903390
So you're saying you hate the writing style?

903422
I base my biggest opinion on the writing style, but if the style is crappy yet the story still works with the style, than it is good.
Overall, it's very complex.

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