Feb
19th
2013
A heartbeat. · 10:00pm Feb 19th, 2013
A heartbeat
What of spinning blood
Churning through and onwards
Racing with indifferent emotion.
A heartbeat
With fire may it grow colder
To burn in due passion
Is that of less violent actuality.
A heartbeat
Lay to rest would it
Only to bring restlessness
O'er one of great similarity.
A heartbeat
Pulsing like an ocean's wake
Enraged in righteous and utter turmoil
Yet so gentle in nature.
~LUC
(P.S.: This one I wrote a few minutes ago is actually based off of A Delicate Balance by JapaneseTeeth. It's an amazing story, so go check it out! Also, the above image is a real photograph!)
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That... That was beautiful...
so...what's the secret meaning behind this one?...
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As the guy who wrote the story this is based on, I approve.
You're a better poet than I am.
No words can describe the shear awesomeness of the picture and poem.
wow, I wouldn't have pegged you as one for poetry, LUC--though that's probably because I don't know you very well, haha. That and I haven't seen any from you before....I think.
How often do you write it?
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HEY!
I'M SUPPOSED TO APPROVE!!!
Anyways . . .
I approve of this. Seems like a lot of thought was put into it.