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Cellin


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  • 583 weeks
    Writing Sins: Bad Descriptions.

    Welcome to another Writing Sins.
    Bad Descriptions are exactly what they sound like, inadequate descriptions. First impressions count for a lot in everything, and descriptions are the first thing most people see next to the title and if a description is bad, your story isnt going to look good to your reader. take for example the description for my little portal, friendship is science.

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  • 584 weeks
    We get it, you hate the Alicorn Twilight, now shut up. (you know whats ahead.)

    yup. Twilight is now an alicorn, and about a third of the brony fandom is flipping their shit.
    Some predict it will end the fandom, others are probably screaming about leaving, to the second group;
    WE DON'T CARE.

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    9 comments · 470 views
  • 585 weeks
    Writing sins, schizophrenic character development.

    Welcome to writing sins.
    Here, i point out mistakes stories can make in hopes of dissuading people from making them.
    schizophrenic character development is what happens when characters flip flop from personality to personality, trust to trust, ect. ect. this can be seen in stories like after the honeymoon. This causes unlikable characters and incomprehensible plots.

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  • 586 weeks
    Were the changelings evil or just desperate?

    Hello again.
    I've seen a lot of stories where the reason the changelings attacked because they were desperate for food. I think that's a bit wrong.

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  • 588 weeks
    I think i can be called a hypocrite now.

    Hello.
    I'm Nova Shino. You might have heard of me or seen some of my comments.
    I might be in a few people/ponies minds for my dislike of FOE (Fallout equestria) fan stories.
    And now I'm writing one.

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Feb
14th
2013

Writing sins, schizophrenic character development. · 3:01am Feb 14th, 2013

Welcome to writing sins.
Here, i point out mistakes stories can make in hopes of dissuading people from making them.
schizophrenic character development is what happens when characters flip flop from personality to personality, trust to trust, ect. ect. this can be seen in stories like after the honeymoon. This causes unlikable characters and incomprehensible plots.
Example from After the honeymoon include characters suddenly trusting and then not trusting chrysalis.
The best way to avoid it? understand your character's.
you have to know what goes on in your characters head. if he or she doesn't hold a grudge, has anger management issues, all that jazz.
if your character stops trusting someone after large amounts of revealed lies and evidence stacks up against that character, your okay. if characters suddenly don't trust another or anyone else for no reason at all, your story is suffering schizophrenic character development.
with that, i'm Nova Shino, and see you later.

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