Repair work, chapter 3 fixed · 2:53am Mar 7th, 2012
After everyone and their cousin PMing me about how pinkies section is too jarring and disrupts the flow of the story I have removed that section. From what I can tell the story flows better without it. just so everyone is happy. However, if you really liked that section you can pm me and I can set something up on Google docs.
THERE. Now I can start on the next chapter.
Good. NOW BACK TO WORK ON THE NEW CHAPTER!