Update #3 on Ode to Pinkie Pie

Right, so I made the deadline of releasing a chapter of "Ode to Pinkie Pie" every two days by about fourty-five minutes. That's cutting it a bit close. Yep, I screwed around a whole lot today and found out that compared to my dorm room at college, my house is not a work inducing environment. This chapter was hard to concieve an idea for, but at least I'm nearly done. The end is in sight. Just two more chapters, and I'll be able to move on. I'd appreciate any comments from anyone. It's pretty grim when no one is saying anything about it. The way I see it, any kind of feedback would be great. Are you all sick of this story? Is my writing superficial? Do I need to not ever write another word again? Anything would be great. I was looking at the stats and it looks like the amount of people viewing is starting to go down rather than up and I'm pretty sure that's not a good sign.
Oh well. I really only wrote this story for the substance in the first two chapters and the epilogue which is coming, so I'm most concerned with what poeple will think about those parts. Pinkie Pie is really an amazing literary arguement that deserves a look, which is why I wrote this. Yet I'm having to fill in all these other parts to bring everyone to that realization. I did have some fun with this chapter though.