Updates...

CHAPTER 3 IS COMPLETE!

Just... one... small...problem...

My editor, The_Foreman, is sick... so... he can't edit for me... The chapter has 9000+ words in it... (The largest chapter I have ever written ever, but that's because it's two Point of views, otherwise it would be like 4800 or something, still would be largest chapter though.) So yeah, thats why my chapter took so long.

My friend Kyle (he's not on FimFiction) said he may help me tonight... I am not betting on it though, he told me he has a life now so... If any of you guys want to help me leave me a message and I will reply.

--Gareth

Comments

[Lord Guffington]

I would help somehow, but I can't be an editor to save my life. Anything else that needs help with?

[Moon_Skritch]

806253 Not really thats pretty much all I need... is someone to help me edit.

[Lord Guffington]

806257
I've never had an editor, and don't plan on having one soon. Takes too long to get chapters out. And I have autocorrect

[Moon_Skritch]

806261 My issues are more Grammar... The comma and I are not friends...

[Lord Guffington]

806264
Periods suck. Commas rule

[Moon_Skritch]

806270 Lol but they don't love me... Comma and I fight all the time, cause I always put it where it is not needed or I don't put where it was needed, or I put a period instead of a comma.

[Mclovin]

Just wait. He might recover as soon as possible. If not, ask another editor.

[Moon_Skritch]

806317 I don't know any others...

[Mclovin]

Then I guess you just wait until The_Forman is well again. Sorry

[OfficialPinkaMenaX]

My friend told me he has a life now.....

Good one. Don't forget I'm still waiting for Dean's Real Life!

[Moon_Skritch]

813653 A life... what's that? Lol jk

And I don't know what I want to do for Dean's Real Life, it's kind of on Hiatus right now......

[OfficialPinkaMenaX]

814479
On Hiatus.....
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