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I am in charge of running the group centered around this faggot's story, The Everfree Knight. It would be appreciated if you would support us, please!

Knights of the Holy Order is the name of the group, and that is the link to it. Please give it look.

Comments

[Nataniel]

the story is not that bad, but the boyo is kinda Marty Stu. everyone love him and he have free awesum powaz which are rip-off of Sol Badguy's, and the author even confirm it himself in the story. not that i'm totally against it, but it would be better if he would just create the attacks himself, because readers that have no experience with GG wont understand a shit about them, except they're fire-based and he shout the names of his attacks.

[Serpenti]

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Really? Have you read the chapters? Honestly, in no way has he been Marty Stu. Look, he acts like how he's required to. Sure, he does take most of his attacks from Sol Badguy, but he does come up with his own attacks, and the main reason he even uses Sol's attacks is because it's the quickest and surest way he knows of to deal a lot of damage.

As for not understanding GG, well I think people are smart enough to understand that its a game, and whatnot.

As for the shouting, Think of them as voice commands. He has to give a command to his built up magic to get its full effect. No one instantly loves him, Alpine loves him because she always wanted a son and he's willing to give that to her despite many of his reservations. As for "Free Awshum Powaz", he had to give up a loved one and his childhood for these powers, how is this free? That's a pretty steep price if you ask me.

If you want to criticize something, at least understand what you're criticizing. And send it to me, not this guy since it isn't his story.