I am fuck.ng stupid. · 6:58pm Jan 18th, 2013
So I just realised, that I have way more fun and it is way easier to creating a new story then continues writing one.
What I am getting at is, that I had this idea for a story stuck in my head for a few days now and everytime I try to ride a chapter for "Of Magic and Power" or "Raving all Night", I basically get no ideas at all.
So to counter reacted this, I wrote a concept of the idea I had.
So this blog will hopefully get this here out of my head.
The Story has no name yet, also it is HiE, for some strange reason am I quiet fond of that setting. Strange……
It focuses on the 4 humans Wlliam Heap, Sean Richard, Erica Murray and Kimi Hill, who are the chosen ones of a prophecy in Equestria. They are brought their after Celestia and Luna see the sights from the prophecy. They will receive each a certain power, which is more or less based on their personality. The problem no one of the persons involved know, what their power is and how to control it. So Celestia and Luna send them to Ponyville to meet the Elements and figured out their power and learn to control them, before the arising evil appears.
Now I will give a short description of the 4 main characters:
William Heap is a sports student. He is 26 years old. He is your average white jock. He chose to go to a sports college, since he is a martial arts teacher and a skilled football player. He is short temperate and thick headed, which caused him lot of trouble. He is a very active person, who hardly ever stands still. He can also be very random.
Sean Richard was the only black mechanic in his service station. He is 72 years and is now retired. Ever since the death of his death, he shut himself in. After his grandchild taught him chess, did he start to leave his house again. Sean is a very thoughtful person, who has experienced many things in his life. This lead him to reacted very calm and wise to a situation, find the right solution.
Erica Murray is a high-school student in her final years. She likes to party and hang out with her friends. She is a determined and self-confident person, who can be a very loud from time to time. She isn‘t nervous about writing her finals, since she is a very smart person. She also has a hispanic background.
Kimi Hill is a 8 year elementary school student. She has a asian background. She has a very childish and girly personality. She is also very shy and scared around new people. But once she gets to know someone, she easily opens up to them. She is a very happy person and she likes unicorns.
and a short teaser or maybe the beginning of the story:
Celestia and Luna stood alone in their throne room, studying some books, they found in the library. They never knew, that the books were there, but one night they suddenly remember them. So they decided to study them to learn more about their sudden interest in them. They told the story of a old prophecy, in which a unknown power while arise, which will threaten Equestria. The Elements of Harmony was supposedly unless against it, since it came from the imbalance between the Elements. Only four beings of a foreign race could save their lands from this power, but only if these beings could find, who they really are. Underneath the prophecy stood two spells, one to call the beings and one to grant them a power, based one their personality. Celestia and Luna wondered if the prophecy was true, though they doubted, that there was a power, which could overwhelm the Elements of Harmony. They discussed the matter for some time, then reached the conclusion, this was the imagination of some crazy pony. They returned to their usual schedules and forgot about the prophecy. A month after that was when the nightmares started.
aaaand I'm done. Hopefully the thing is out of the annoying brain of mine, so I can focus on studying and writing again. Stupid brain.
Also if you like the basic idea, comment, give suggestions, pm me or what ever you want to do. Maybe I make it a story, since I have a more detailed concept on my laptop, but i don't know.
That's it from me,
cya sometime,
Tripl3M
P.S.: "Raving all Night" likers; here is a big sorry. Just can write it at the moment. I don't know what to write in chapter three expect that one twist-like-thingy. (Not the pony. Like story twist)
P.P.S.: To all "Of Magic and Power" people, chapter three and four are finished, but they need to be proveread. Better said you want them to proveread. Even I found some mistakes, when I was rereading and rewriting the chapter. Chapter five is in progress, there are some minor hickups, but give me some time and I'll get it finished. Also to all thost HiE-haters, "Of Magic and Power" is not really a HiE story. Chapter 4 and 5 are not in Equestria. The story will switch between places every now and then.