After nine years in development, hopefully it will have been worth the wait. · 8:16pm Nov 5th, 2011
One hat to whoever gets that reference. Anyway, because of the positive response and six more trackers I got after I re-published Chapter One of Envy and Arrogance, I decided to ax my original plan of four chapters uploaded per week and do one a day instead. Hope you're happy with yourselves. Just so you know, this story is already all written, I just need to publish it in intervals. Expect a steady stream. No long wait times for you!
For those who have been with me from the first draft, here's your news.
Thanks to generous help from several editors including sonic30, Kits, and Galactic, I have made the following major changes (and many more) to my story:
-As you've probably noticed, I've rearranged the music system. This combines several prompts and gets rid of others entirely. Also, my music choices have been altered, and some scenes either have no music or have been rewritten for other music. So, in general, the music system won't get in the way as much and is easier to ignore if desired.
-Telling, grammar issues, plotholes, and out-of-characters have been eliminated.
-EVERY OC in this story has been tweaked. I don't want to spoil it for you, but I will tell you that they are all far more interesting than they were at the start.
-There is officially a Chapter Twenty. It's only a page, though.
-In general, particularly in the earlier chapters, scenes have been completely scrapped and rewritten. Not all of them, but most of them.
Also, so far I've written six chapters of Guilt and Hate. However, once I get there, I probably won't write them at as fast a pace. One more thing: I am working on a secret collection for fans of the series that will go more in-depth with some of my OCs. It's currently in prewriting stage, but it's making progress.
Gaben