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431 weeks
It's been a while

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460 weeks
Continuing writing?

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476 weeks
Character Development and Rainbow Dash

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Jan

11th

2013

Pre reader · 7:16pm Jan 11th, 2013

After the early release of the first chapter of "A Love That I Can't Win", it has been becoming more and more clear to me that I could use a pre reader, sometime during the end of this weekend.

Since I can't always use commas right to save my life, it would be helpful to get some of these errors pointed out.
Staying up on New Years has taken its toll. Instead of falling asleep at 11-12 p.m. I am now sleeping at 4-5 a.m.

Either way, I don't plan on giving up on this story.

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migzie

migzie #1 · Jan 11th, 2013 · · ·

waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaait fluttershy cannot win rainbow's love!?!?!?

don't worry... my sleep patterns suck themselves....

super3rainbow1

super3rainbow1 #2 · Jan 11th, 2013 · · ·

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Yeah.. there are times when I think Rainbow Dash should submit to her adorableness

What sucks most about having your sleep pattern messed up is that the solution so far is to stay up the whole day until the intended time for falling asleep

migzie

migzie #3 · Jan 11th, 2013 · · ·

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blah i'll sleep when i am 6 feet under....

hold on. i'm more confused than 20 blind lesbians wandering around a fish market...
fluttershy cannot win rd's love though rd should submit to her adorableness... le sigh.

hawthornbunny

hawthornbunny #4 · Jan 11th, 2013 · · ·

I haven't actually found many problems with your readability. Your spelling is fine, grammar is fine, punctuation is fine (you use paragraphs correctly, which instantly puts you a level above many writers ;) ). The only problem you have is writing style, which will improve as you gain experience.

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