Updates. Super awesome, amazing, 20% cooler updates. Read 'em. · 2:08am Jan 8th, 2013
HI EVERYHUMAN! ColdHeart here. First, something not MLP-related that I just need to share with everyhuman: I just found out today that I got a PERFECT SCORE on my English II Pre-Ap midterm exam and a 95 on my Creative Writing midterm!!! I usually hate bragging, but I just had to be a major Rainbow Dash about this. I LOVE it when I do things right! Pinkie Pie, care to portray the way I'm feeling?
there ya have it.
Okay, then, enough about me, and onto my story. (Rainbow Dash would be so proud right now) When I sat down to work on chapter five of The Diary of Pinkamena Diane Pie, I realized that it was... well, sloppy. REALLY sloppy. So I up and deleted the entire thing and started over. Yaaaay. (Now Fluttershy nods in approval). Then, I decided to look up the published chapters of my story and wouldn't ya just know it? Mistake. After mistake. After mistake. PLUS a couple holes in the plot. (Throws keyboard across the room). Basically, I'm going to improve. EVERYTHING. Once the whole story is published, I plan to copy it, paste it onto Microsoft Word Documents, and attack the thing thoroughly, making sure EVERYTHING is perfect. Just for you. Being my very first fanfic, I want to make sure that everyhuman gets a great reading experience from it. Soooo yeah. Those of you who actually read this, I thank you with much mustache. ColdHeart out.
What is it with you and mustaches?
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I have no idea what you're talking about... 
-mustache-
facial hair is funny
688402 So as long as something has a mustache it's cool in your book, seems a little biased to me.
688409 LOL
it is a little biased... 
Congratulations! And I can't wait for the new chapters. And possibly the opportunity to read through them with you?
688437 thanx! and yes, my faithful editor and proofreader
, when the fifth chapter is finished, I'll let you look over it. 
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I look forward to it. Also, I've made some progress with my story, and I need an opinion on the baking with Pinkie Pie part, to see if it's good enough to stay.
688451 Pinkie Pie? Baking?
yes, Mr.Stephens, it can stay