I'm back! Sort of. I've been working on a lot of different projects that I'd hope to upload someday, but unfortunately for me, work, hobbies, relationships and a number of other things seemed to get in the way quite considerably. One of the biggest problems I have had is focusing on a project with little support, and little exposure. Once I get feedback, I really start to get the ball rolling;
So, as you've... probably known for an agonizing long while... I've been working on a new story, set in a future Equestria with steampunk-age technology. I would really appreciate some pre-readers for opinions on the prologue, and possibly an editor, but that's not totally necessary, as I'm comfortable reading some stuff again and fixing it myself.
Do you know what it feels like to be alone... to feel empty... to just never want to wake up again... to just find someone, know matter who, and hold them tight and just cry?
Hey guys, you know how I was thinking about getting some help on my stories and things? WELL, NOW I NEED IT! :3
I'm looking for proofreaders, pre-readers, and people willing to give constructive criticism so when I release my new story it's as refined as possible. I would very much appreciate any help you guys would be willing to give.
(Okay guys, I've finished the VERY LONG description of the story, and I want to see if you think it's well written and entertaining. I also want to tip you guys off about what's actually going on in the story so you have an easier time making and perfecting your OCs. Without further ado, here's the FRICKING DESCRIPTION.)
20069 Nope. It was pretty darn quick. Also, I love the multinational cast. Not just the US. We have a Canadian, a Russian, a Chinese, and 3 Americans. Shame there wasn't an Englishman.
20131 Ah your response feeds me...... come to the dark side young padawan....
20115 Those fur hats with the flaps remind me of the ones truckers wear...... idk why though.... but those ear flaps provide good ear cover though.... despite looking slightly weird... mmm fur
20940 Meh me and spicy don't mix well.... especially if you happen to accidentally eat a piece of sushi that had soaked a little to long in a wasabi/soy sauce mixture to long.... god did it burn.....
21174 Well if you arn't going to snort it you could always just smell it a little then eat some of it... even if it doesn't really taste that good by itself.
Yesh.
20043 Yay for one word comments!
I thought it will take longer:D
20069 Nope. It was pretty darn quick. Also, I love the multinational cast. Not just the US. We have a Canadian, a Russian, a Chinese, and 3 Americans. Shame there wasn't an Englishman.
20073 Oooooh russian.... will there be anything about them talking about Vodka?
20093 Frees asked me not to make him the stereotypical Russian.
So no vodka, AK47s and fur hats.
Still, I'll Russian the CRAP out of him.
Just trying to work out how to type the accent.
20110 Oh well.... I guess the stereotypical russian thing has been done to death probably... Fur hat is russian? I thought that was Canadian?
20114 You're thinking toques. You've never seen WW2 footage of Russians with fur hats? You know, the ones with the ear flaps?
the only thing that comes to mind is
FINALLY
20114 i must ask, are you one of them?
20124 Yes. He is.
20130 dang, that means i can't hurt him in ways i really should not explain![:fluttercry:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/fluttercry.png)
20131 Ah your response feeds me...... come to the dark side young padawan....
20115 Those fur hats with the flaps remind me of the ones truckers wear...... idk why though.... but those ear flaps provide good ear cover though.... despite looking slightly weird... mmm fur
20141 -_- are you a moron or something, I AM THE DARK SIDE
20141 meh i prefer being neuteral (yeah i changed, read my blog)
20141 I own and wear one regularly.
If I had to give myself an alignment in DnD terms,
It'd be Chaotic Good (Vigilante, Freedom Fighter, etc) but with some psychotic (evil) elements.
20525 I'm more of a Lawful Evil... with a raincloud of Chaos for good measure... mmmm chaos.... tastes like chicken.
20594 I thought xenomorphs would be more of a neutral evil.
20612 Not if their a human alien hyrbrid.... and no not the mugly newborn.... that one has a little to much human (or was that alien) in it...
20736 Either way, their heads still look good on my wall.
I AM THE DARK SIDE'S BADASS CRAZY UNCLE WHO SAYS SHIT OVER THE INTERWEBS.
20742 Better have a wall immune to highly caustic acid....
20753 I drink the blood outta their heads first. That's how tough and masculine of a lycan that I am.
And no, the burning sensation is normal.
20759 The acid gives it a nice spicy flavor... similar to how rainbows taste...
20927 I wuv spicy fings.
OM NOM NOM.
20940 Meh me and spicy don't mix well.... especially if you happen to accidentally eat a piece of sushi that had soaked a little to long in a wasabi/soy sauce mixture to long.... god did it burn.....
20975 Oh man. I do that shit all the time. Cleans the sinuses for sure. :3
20984 That piece of sushi disagreed with me for about 2 days..... though yeah... boy does that wasabi clear the sinuses...
20993 I could use some of that right now, lemme tell ya.
21042 Go down to the nearest store that sales asian food products and get some wasabi.... then snort a little of it....
21053 I ALREADY HAZ WASABI.
I'm just not a junkie. That jazz don't fly with Chuckles. NO SIR.
21174 Well if you arn't going to snort it you could always just smell it a little then eat some of it... even if it doesn't really taste that good by itself.
21180 That's what he said. :3
21190 lol, Oh You.![:rainbowlaugh:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowlaugh.png)
21201
Oh... Yeah... :3
Why do I have the feeling that the chinese person is deception..... idk why but I usually connect asian being sneaky....
21303 No spoilers.![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)