Overcorrection

Smoothing out over-correction, word repetition, and other minor flaws with Fostering Intelligence.

I'm actually kind've embarrassed how much there is too. I just thought the introduction was a bit slow, so I fixed that up as best I could... But the problem is endemic,yeesh! XD; I thought I edited this pretty thoroughly, and I bounced it off my editor at least three times!

Anyway, polish!

Comments

[Kate_Bit]

Hey Potter, I gotta say I love what you produce, Sunset Looms was actually the first Twilight and Celestia ship that I read, an I loved how you painted celestia as a victim of her own desire to avoid pain and heartbreak. so if I need to wait a little longer for you to smooth things out I'm cool