I'm back! Sort of. I've been working on a lot of different projects that I'd hope to upload someday, but unfortunately for me, work, hobbies, relationships and a number of other things seemed to get in the way quite considerably. One of the biggest problems I have had is focusing on a project with little support, and little exposure. Once I get feedback, I really start to get the ball rolling;
So, as you've... probably known for an agonizing long while... I've been working on a new story, set in a future Equestria with steampunk-age technology. I would really appreciate some pre-readers for opinions on the prologue, and possibly an editor, but that's not totally necessary, as I'm comfortable reading some stuff again and fixing it myself.
Do you know what it feels like to be alone... to feel empty... to just never want to wake up again... to just find someone, know matter who, and hold them tight and just cry?
Hey guys, you know how I was thinking about getting some help on my stories and things? WELL, NOW I NEED IT! :3
I'm looking for proofreaders, pre-readers, and people willing to give constructive criticism so when I release my new story it's as refined as possible. I would very much appreciate any help you guys would be willing to give.
(Okay guys, I've finished the VERY LONG description of the story, and I want to see if you think it's well written and entertaining. I also want to tip you guys off about what's actually going on in the story so you have an easier time making and perfecting your OCs. Without further ado, here's the FRICKING DESCRIPTION.)
If it wasn't for the fact that I am sloth incarnate, and have lots of trouble coming up with characters I would be happy thinking up a idea for one....
19343 yeah, a character with a background laced in deceiving others... either thru conning, maybe they have the gift of lying... They can almost talk their way out of anything by lying... with results that end up better or worse, but for the most part likely worse for someone else.
lol, okay the apology in the blog itself is funny, and i've already submitted one (if you want i could submit another) because i have an endless stream of ideas, some are just plain odd though. cause i really want the story to contnue
If it wasn't for the fact that I am sloth incarnate, and have lots of trouble coming up with characters I would be happy thinking up a idea for one....
19290 Cool beans.
ehh iono how about some spy or con-artist or some gold digger
19343 yeah, a character with a background laced in deceiving others... either thru conning, maybe they have the gift of lying... They can almost talk their way out of anything by lying... with results that end up better or worse, but for the most part likely worse for someone else.
Seems like those ideas would work.
lol, okay the apology in the blog itself is funny, and i've already submitted one (if you want i could submit another) because i have an endless stream of ideas, some are just plain odd though. cause i really want the story to contnue
19874 yeh, i'm gonna submit another, if for no other reason than to move the story along
Cool. Got your character.