I'm back! Sort of. I've been working on a lot of different projects that I'd hope to upload someday, but unfortunately for me, work, hobbies, relationships and a number of other things seemed to get in the way quite considerably. One of the biggest problems I have had is focusing on a project with little support, and little exposure. Once I get feedback, I really start to get the ball rolling;
So, as you've... probably known for an agonizing long while... I've been working on a new story, set in a future Equestria with steampunk-age technology. I would really appreciate some pre-readers for opinions on the prologue, and possibly an editor, but that's not totally necessary, as I'm comfortable reading some stuff again and fixing it myself.
Do you know what it feels like to be alone... to feel empty... to just never want to wake up again... to just find someone, know matter who, and hold them tight and just cry?
Hey guys, you know how I was thinking about getting some help on my stories and things? WELL, NOW I NEED IT! :3
I'm looking for proofreaders, pre-readers, and people willing to give constructive criticism so when I release my new story it's as refined as possible. I would very much appreciate any help you guys would be willing to give.
(Okay guys, I've finished the VERY LONG description of the story, and I want to see if you think it's well written and entertaining. I also want to tip you guys off about what's actually going on in the story so you have an easier time making and perfecting your OCs. Without further ado, here's the FRICKING DESCRIPTION.)
18834 Iced tea? I have drunken so much soda, be it Dr. Pepper/Coca Cola/etc. that I am surprised I haven't gotten anything from that amount of consumption aside from a kidney infection....
Sounds like either a cold or allergies to me....
I had way too much sugar. Damn. Root beer is addictive, I'll tell you that.
18830 heh heh, i drink supersaturated iced tea daily
18834 Iced tea? I have drunken so much soda, be it Dr. Pepper/Coca Cola/etc. that I am surprised I haven't gotten anything from that amount of consumption aside from a kidney infection....
FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK!!!!!!!!
I'm hating this damn cold. I can take pain, but sickness just bugs the crap outta me. Right on my fucking birthday, too.
........Still trying to write.......