To write a stronger basis of my planned sequel, I must look back at my first work and learn what I had originally planned this "Ponified Sherlock" thing to go. I looked at my original notes and saw how each phase of the story eventually evolved into the one I have written. I smile when looking back at it, seeing how far I've gone. Perhaps it may be the amateur writer in me (which I am), but I
So, I've done some rethinking on the last chapter of latest story, and had done some changes to not only improve its mystery element, but to also connect it to the sequel. So, if you read this post, kindly have a look at it and see if it improved. I written out the out-of-the-blue interruption and gave the ending a more ominous and uncertain ending.
Having read all the original 60 Sherlock Holmes stories, I would say the best actor who ever played as the famous sleuth would be Jeremy Brett. His portrayal seemed to make Holmes ripped straight from the pages of the books and into real life. His mannerisms, personality, manners were as true as you could get.
*the lamb has entered the chat*