Update 1 for "The Adventures of Circuit Breaker" - Prologue Flow Changes. · 1:20am Nov 17th, 2023
Hi all, just pointing out an update I did to "Chapter 0 - Prologue". If you haven't read the fanfic yet, below will be spoilers for the chapter:
I decided to improve the narrative flow and hook of the beginning of the chapter. Nothing massive, but I feel like the changes brought to the table here would improve the fanfic as a whole.
I decided to move Circuit Breaker's name and profession introduction to improve the hook at the beginning of the chapter. Other than that, the narrative content is basically unchanged.