oh this is going to be fun. in a spooky way 
would you all be kind to give your opinion on my favorite stories on Fimfiction? · 9:35pm Nov 3rd, 2023
Hello everyone, how are you all?
first a description so you have context
it begins in the human world. The protagonist is not only transformed into a pony like thousands of others in the world. but now he is a mare. To make matters worse she has to deal with the possibility that she is an Alicorn and is forced to be the leader of these pony groups. and deal with the problems and discriminations of humans and perhaps the threat of an invasion, whether extraterrestrial or an infection that creates monsters.
Basically, this is a summary of the stories I have read on Finfiction. But I know not everyone follows these parameters since some look at social problems between ponies and humans and in others, there is an external threat. Also, not in all of these stories the protagonist is an Alicorn or changed gender. There are other variations such as the person being transformed into a dragon, changeling queen, and others, including Anthros. (In the external threat, humans may not turn into ponies but they unite with Equestria to defend themselves.)
Sadly not all of these stories were finished but they left me with the desire to create a story inspired by these concepts. but since I like these stories maybe I don't see their flaws. My question is what are the elements that you think make this story good or bad? what you like and what you don't like.
that way I can adjust the parameters. I also plan to add elements from my favorite manga and anime to create a distinctive design and not just rely on what my favorite authors on Fimfiction created. There are other details and concepts but this is already long so I will leave it for another day. This way I can focus on one detail at a time. I hope this makes sense and I look forward to hearing from all of you.
just in case I know that an original brony story can't be published on fimfiction, and I don't plan on breaking the rules. I will publish it elsewhere but this is the only brony web page that I know of. Where I can ask for your opinions?
