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  • 1 week
    Eight years

    I have officially been on Fimfiction for 8 years!? It doesn't even feel like it's been that long. Well, I'll probably be writing Fimfiction for another few years. Time flies, and I have to say that despite all the time it takes to write my stories, it's well worth it. I really don't plan on stopping, as this is a way to keep myself busy, and overall, I enjoy writing my crazy stories and seeing

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  • 5 weeks
    Ranking every episode in Season Six based on personal preference.

    Season 6

    1st place: Gauntlet of Fire

    2nd place: To Where and Back Again, parts 1 & 2

    3rd place: The Times are a Changeling

    4th place: The Crystalling Parts 1 & 2

    5th place: Saddle Row & Rec

    6th place: A Hearth's Warming Tail

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    9th Place: The Gift of the Maud Pie

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  • 5 weeks
    To Where and Back again Parts One and Two

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  • 6 weeks
    Thoughts on Top Bolt

    This is another episode I felt like abit out of place, but I did enjoy watching it as I relate to Vapor Trail a lot. The idea of this episode is mainly centered around two ponies: a shy, somewhat nervous mare named Vapor Trail and a stallion Pegasus, who is rather full of himself named Sky Stinger. The two usually work as a team as new cadets training to be a part of the Wonderbolt Academy, but

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  • 6 weeks
    Thoughts on Where the Apple Lies

    This episode is one that I would not expect to be in season six, but it was one of my favorite episodes in the season, given how it gives us some backstory to the Apples, which I honestly enjoy when an episode focuses on the Apple family. The episode is basiclly a fable to teach Apple Bloom about telling lies and how Applejack got herself into a heap of trouble lying to Filthy Rich about selling

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Oct
19th
2023

Thoughts on the Cart Before the Ponies · 8:01am Oct 19th, 2023

This episode is one I didn't care for all that much, and I'll explain why, but first, I would like to reminisce a little as this episode reminded me of something from my childhood.

The episode is about how Applejack, Rarity, and Rainbow Dash help the CMC build carts for a derby, but they take over and build the carts that they want over what the CMC wants. This reminded me of when I was a kid, a Cub Scout, and we did Pinewood Derpys, where we built these small cars made of wood and raced them down a ramp. I never cared for them, but I always did my best to make mine. But I always lost mainly because it was apparent many parents would make the cars for their kids. My dad never helped me make mine, so I always made mine by myself, which looked pretty terrible. Don't get me wrong; I didn't care that I lost every time. It was fun, and there was free pizza, which I always looked forward to. But seeing the adults in this episode get overly obsessive in a sport designed for kids made me think of my own similar experiences.

Back to the episode, the plot is straightforward, with what I stated earlier, with Applejack, Rainbow Dash, and Rarity being obsessed with a Derby that Cheerilee organized for the foals in her classroom. As the CMC went to them to help build their carts, but the older mares went with what they wanted the carts to look and ran over what the CMC wanted. Overall, it was an engaging episode with some fun moments, but I mostly felt that there wasn't a lot of agency from the CMC as they tried to get their older sisters to stop, but they were railroading them throughout the episode. Only after a crash did the three older mares realize they were wrong, and they even somewhat tried to blame the CMC for not stopping them, which kind of rubbed me the wrong way. But one thing that made this episode abit better was Cheerilee. She was so enthusiastic about the derby she dressed up in an adorable cheerleading outfit, which looked so cute. Her overall demeanor throughout the episode and making the older mares make up for ruining the first derby was excellent. She made me like the episode enough to say it wasn't that bad. In the end, I think what could've helped was maybe have her be more involved with assisting the CMC to recognize that this event was for them and help change their sisters' minds. That's all I have to say. It's not bad, but I think it could've been better.

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