Rewrite

So despite the rewrite thier we're still alot of errors i made according my friend Rust Phantom who reviewed my chapter, honestly I'm kinda embarrassed how sloppy it turned out.

But I rushed into making this story when it was fresh in my head, and I didn't have much of a plot going so I guess thats on me. But I redid the whole thing as well as I could, making sure to fixed very spelling mistake I could find, redid a few scenarios and make some better less crappy diologue. Hopefully this rewritten version of the chapter is way better than one one before. I hope you enjoy it 🤟😝.