Its a quarter after 2

So I think I've finished chapter 2 of RPP, but I'm leaving it till later so I can get sleep and give it a re-read with better focus.

Here's a little segment.

She was falling.

Fluttershy was not the terrible flyer she used to be but as she plummeted towards the ground in an uncontrolled spin, she found her wings had frozen to her side.

She’d been with her friends, sans Rainbow Dash who was about to complete her second loop around the world, when Twilight Sparkle had cast her spell to message Rainbow, her world flashed white, and now, maybe this was the end? She was falling so fast.

Or, wait, wasn’t she at flight camp?

Fluttershy’s eyes shot open, above her was the flight camp and a Sonic Rainboom. Of course, Rainbow was racing against those bullies, but they’d knocked her off her cloud. Whatever other thought Fluttershy was about to have was interrupted, as lots of somethings, cushioned her fall.