Before I Switched to Angry Birds · 6:59am Mar 30th, 2023
Before i switched to E rated stories and rebranded my account to Angry Birds, originally i wrote M rated saw crossovers the first portrayal of the series failed miserably so i rewrote them as Saw Rebirth which was more faithful to the movies and also failed miserably i was only able to publish 2 chapters of Saw 1 rebirth before i deleted the rest of the series
Saw 1 Rebirth:
Sea Swirl as Adam Faulkner-Stanheight
An alicorn OC called Dr. Chemical Beaker as Dr. Lawrence Gordon
A unicorn OC named Radio Shack as Jigsaw/John Kramer
Nurse Redheart as Zep Hindle
Pony Joe as Paul Leahy
Starlight Glimmer as Mark Wilson
Twilight as Detective Allison Kerry
Another unicorn OC, Rising Hope as David Tapp
A pegasus oc, Violet Blossom as Steven Sing
Saw 2 Rebirth:
Pinkie Pie as Michael Marks (Victim of Death Smile suppose to be a reference to Smile HD)
Rarity as Eric Matthews
Sweetie Belle as Daniel Matthews
Braeburn as Xavier Chavez
An earth pony OC Mark Hooves as Amanda Young
Spitfire as Gus Colyard (Wasn't gonna die from The Magnum Eyehole)
Limestone Pie as Addison Corday (The one killed by The Magnum Eyehole)
Thunderlane as Jonas Singer (Cause Gus is Jonas' manger, Thunderlane is a wonderbolt and Spitfire is captain of the Wonderbolts)
Luster Dawn as Obi Tate
Sunset Shimmer as Laura Hunter
Saw 3 Rebirth:
An earth pony oc named Bullet Vest as Jeff Denlon/Reinhart
Amethyst Star as Lynn Denlon
Tempest Shadow as Troy
Golden Harvest/Carrot Top as Danica Scott (Survived Freezer Room)
Lady Gaval/Justice as Judge Halden (Died from Pig Vat)
Cheese Sandwich as Timothy Young (Never decided if he would survive the Rack or not)
Saw 4 Rebirth
Spike as Daniel Rigg
Night Light as Peter Strahm
Twilight Velvet as Lindsey Perez
Sandbar as Art Blank
Yona as Trevor (Given more information during the story, one of Sandbar's cilent)
Gallus and Silverstream as Rex and Morgan (Implied that Silver was the one abused until the spike trap reveals that Gallus is the one being abused)
Smolder as Ivan Landsness
Ocellus as Brenda
Princess Cadance as Mark Hoffman (Although she was Introduced in Saw 1 Rebirth as the Reverse Bear Trap victim taking Amanda's/Mark Hooves's role, Saw 3 Rebirth reveals that Mark Hooves was the victim of a later version of the Reverse Bear Trap simply called the Bear Trap Helmet)
earth pony oc called Shiny Antique as Jill Tuck
(Spike lets the timer hit zero but still ends up killing Sandbar but luckily Rarity survives)
Saw 5 Rebirth
Flash Sentry as Seth Baxter (Princess Cadance built a Hacksaw style trap to kill him for killing Shining Armor and leading to Flurry Heart to committing suicide)
Big Mac as Charles Salomon
Soarin as Mallick Scott
Maud Pie as Ashley Kazon
Fleur de Lis as Lubba Gibbs
Trixie as Brit Stevenson
(Had trouble decided who would survive was gonna go with Soarin and Big Mac but then tired Fleur and Big Mac but in the end i couldn't really decided)
Saw 6 Rebirth
Princess Celestia as William Easton
Princess Luna as Pamela Jenkins
Garble as Hank
Terramar as Debbie
Pharynx and Gabby As Allen as Addy (Both Died)
Ember, Thorax, Queen Novo (Killed) Princess Skystar (Killed), Prince Rutherford (Killed) and Gilda (Killed), on the Shotgun Carousel
Mr. Cake as Harold Abbott
Mrs. Cake as Tara Abbott
Pound Cake as Brent Abbott
An earth pony oc, Amanda Foal (Mark Hooves' Marefriend) as Cecil Adams
(Both Spike and Rarity are killed by Cadance in this story)
(While Pound Cake still chose for Celestia to die i never decided if she died or she managed to dodge the hydrofluoric acid in time
Saw 7 Rebirth
A.K Yearling (Isn't Daring Do) as Bobby Dagen
Quibble Pants as Cale
(Couldn't think of anyone to cast as, Evan, Kara, Dan and Jake or Nina and Suzanne)
Rainbow Dash as Joyce Dagen
(This story will reveal that not only is Dr Chemical Beaker alive but also Sea Swirl she survived, asphyxiation with a plastic bag from Mark Hooves, Chemical got her out of the bathroom and trained her to become a Hacksaw apprentice since he was already a apprentice at the time
Jigsaw/Hacksaw Rebirth
(The prologue was gonna be called Hello Cadance and it'll reveal that Princess Cadance not only killed Flash but also terrorized and possibly killed his family, later on she'll be put in a third Reverse Bear Trap if she wants to escape the bathroom in the end she fails the task and is successfully killed by the Reverse Bear Trap ending her reign of terror)
(Besides the prologue i didn't really have any idea for the cast of this story, the closest i got was a Unicorn oc, Jigsaw as Logan Nelson)
(On a side note at some point i wasn't even considering Saw 7 or Hacksaw cause in the ending of Saw 5 Rebirth i was deciding if Night Light would die or escape the Glass Coffin Room by shooting one of the pressurized gas canisters, if he escaped one of his hooves would get crushed and severed by the walls which is what Cadance used to make it look like Night Light set her up to frame her as the Hacksaw Appercetice. Night Light would be absent from most of Saw 6 until after Cadance escape the Reverse Bear Trap which is when he'll unexpectedly return and kill Cadance)
(If anyone decides to adapt this into a actual story give me credit it wasn't anthro when i wrote it but i think it could work better as anthro
You missed an opportunity for an actor allusion there. Lindsey Perez was played by Athena Karkanis, who voices Opaline in Make your Mark/Tell your Tale!
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Rate this concept: Remove all the lore making this just a simple one off story, Radio Shack works that a factory that either produces donuts or dolls, which is where his doll (Stichy) comes from, and notices that his co workers like Pony Joe (In Saw Rebirth Paul was was a toy maker which for some reason reminded me of this) don't appreciate life so he test them
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Has Saw: Rebirth vibes to it. Go for it!
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I think a reason why my original attempts failed miserably was because I just couldn’t develop a side plot, since it would either wrap up too quickly and and move onto the traps or just feel like a flatter description of movie, another reason could be because I gave it a M rating rather than T rating.
How do you think I should spell Radio doll’s name
Do you think the characters I picked Pony Joe (Paul) Starlight (Mark) and Mark Hooves (Amanda) could work well, there will also be 2 extra traps from the new Saw X that will be in this story
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I'd suggest changing Mark Hooves' name to avert the One Steve Limit (seeing as you already have a character based on Hoffman).
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Saw is a pretty lore heavy and serious movie Franchise unlike the other things I write like AB or Mickey Mouse, any tips on improving my story telling
Don’t know why you’re bringing up the One Steve Limit cause there’s no other OC named Mark not based on. Like I said this is a one off story can’t keep up with the whole series
Things I forgot to mention about this one off story: Radio’s cancer free, and either a near death experience or attempted suicide led to his new found appreciation for life and his doll was created in the factory he worked at
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Fair enough. I'd need to see a writing sample to comment on writing quality and storytelling.
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I know this is very off topic (only time I’ll go off topic I swear) but what are your thoughts on a this forum post I made
If someone agrees to it, first have the reprise and then have the first segment as a flashback which introduces the characters
I know you’re not much of a Disney fan (only story is about Disneyland) as your are a Thomas The Tank Engine fan hence your name
As for the writing sample I’ll do a trap segment and the introduction to Radio Shack
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All sound good to me.
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You’ll have to wait for the writing sample cause I’m a 8th grader which means I have a lot of my hands so for now rate these concepts that aren’t Disney related
“Licensed Physician”: “Dr” Silverstream, a assistant is kicked out of an operation for being to silly, daffy If you might Dr.Novo the one she was working for, says to not come back until she helps a patient, so when she find one she hits them, Sandbar (who pretty healthy) on the head with a mallet and attempts to “cure him” in any way possible inspired The Daffy Doc from Looney Tunes, except longer and more gags
Hippogriff Season: Gallus goes hunting for Seaponies/Hippogriffs (Silverstream in particular) with the help of his hunting dog Winona since ducks can both fly and hang around the water based on Porky’s Duck Hunt except with more gags
Both stories are anthro