Each snowflake is different from the other. All of them are together despite their differences and are never separated, they are interdependent.
Orange and yellow leaves were falling on my head and cold wind
The neat mane made me look like a forest.
Maritime Bay was getting smaller and smaller and I was getting closer to Opaline's Castle.
The sky was almost orange with yellow streaks and a very small amount of purple could be seen in the sky.
The crows were caving above me and passing by.
I looked at my black hooves with magenta fur, I wore light purple eye shadow to hide my identity and a purple cape to hide my wings that sometimes came under my hooves and
I had tied my hair in a ponytail (Misty said everyone knows this style) and I had even added turquoise streaks to it with a temporary color and I hoped no one would recognize me.
Hi. Well, I wanted to say that my new story has 10 parts, and I have written 8 parts of it so far. I plan to upload at least 3 to 5 parts before the release of Chapter 5. I would appreciate it if you could help. 
Dear Misty Brightdawn,
Your story Sunny Sparkle has failed moderation on FimFiction for the following reason(s):
- Your descriptions need to describe the story, not that you use a translator.
- Your dialogue isn't formatted correctly for English.
Please make the required changes and resubmit.
My first story failed, I'm really sad 
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On the bright side, those sound like issues that can be fixed pretty easily, all things considered. Best of luck!
Girl, you’re not alone. I got a similar private message when I first started writing on fimfiction in 2013. I was in your hooves too. Whatever is required to be changed and rewritten, have someone help you out like an editor. That was a suggestion a user gave to me about 6 years ago. After someone has helped you with making changes to that chapter of your story, you can resubmit your story.
Hang in there now
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Aww...don't be sad! This is just a minor setback. The description should be easy enough, and I read the little excerpt in your other blog and it looked fine. You got this!
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Thank you