Chapter 11 · 10:22pm Dec 31st, 2022
So this chapter was fun to write. I really don't like how little the show did with the emotions that could have been shown after Luna's return. I really wanted to make that resolution more intimate and emotional. You sister's are back together and there's so much to deal with other than just sorry and everything's good. I also think the cultivated relationship between Twilight and Celestia would bother Luna a bit so that's another fun plot point. I tried to nail how hurt Luna is in this chapter because I hate how everything in canon is always her fault. Here, she's not completely to blame for Nightmare Moon. Again main purpose of this story is to make Celestia, Luna, and Cadance a lot more powerful, fleshed out, and interesting. Hope it's coming through at least a little cause I'm rewatching the series and goodness they treat the princesses that aren't Twilight like trash.
