I need editor's help to finding mistakes

Hi, folks, as you probably know, I recently finished a pretty big job of translating my fanfic Family harmony into English, which is a pretty good success overall. But that's not the only work I want to translate, and now I have plans to take on a new translation. It will be a 6 chapter (53 pages) short story about the romance between Smolder and Ocellus. And I could use someone who would be willing to check my work for various mistakes.

So, if you want to help me can write me in profile. In fact, I will take care of all the basic work, and you will only have to check my written text and correct any mistakes in it, if they are there.