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Humanity what is with this massively unnecessary double-double spacing going on?
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I wish I knew myself. It's been a problem with the site itself since it's most recent overhaul and I can't fix it. The only way I can get rid of the excessive spacing is to go in and meticulously reduce the number of spaces manually, which would be too time consuming. All I can recommend is trying to mess with the settings at the top and see what helps. Hopefully the admins are being made aware of this awkward design choice and will fix it next update.
Starlight is dead.... Now I wonder if you will keep Sombra alive .....ofcourse if he will show up in this...Timeline?
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Sorry brother, I should gad said watch ur step, their are legos on the floor.
Well, that was satisfying!!! Any one who dislikes Starlight will have a field day with this one, like me. Great chapter man. Im guessing we are getting near the end of this Slice of Life volume?
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Hmmm.... I’d say there may be no more than 5 chapters left now.
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Theoretically speaking: If an action has been added or altered in between seasons, then the timeline has altered into a different branch thus the actions of what was the anomaly that occur will change as well in it's normal continuity to which any new action from the previous universe would appear with different results or would not appear due to there'll be no correlation within the continuity.
If my hypothesis is correct; this is more or less a Silver Age Universe while the universe in the current seasons right now are what we feared the most; The New 52 MLP universe if time has been altered enough to add in a new Mane character for the sake of it
Ed, what have I told you about needlessly tasking one's digestive system?
So! Just out of topic, what kind of setting in the field of combat do you prefer? Like, how do you want your story to be like when fighting gets involved, just to picture how it goes.
Like: Dragonball Xenoverse-style, Smash, or Final Fantasy: Dissidia
I'm not sure I asked you this already but, what do you think?
Also, can I ask about how you post images on your page or in chapter? How do you do it and what site do you use?
I could just rub that dead Glimmer all over my face. I am honestly tired of people taking her... philosophy and the reasons behind it and trying to make it out to be more than it was. Trying to make it sound reasonable, or write it off as not that bad.
Just the petulant ravings of a psychopath turned Mary Sue. Not even a smack on the wrist for creating worlds full of death, slavery, destruction, and even that final one which looked like the Sisters might have killed each other and doomed the whole world to burning and freezing in equal measures. Who for some reason is the current showrunner's favorite pony and thus got so much screentime and becoming so necessary to the story.
She chose to be a failure all of her life instead of rising above like literally everyone else. Now she finally gets what she deserves for being a tyrannical psychopathic brain-washing villain.
Alright. I have a theory, and from what ive seen in comments, this book only has a few chapters left. Unfortunately, ill be keeping it to myself until i find that am proven correct or incorrect.
This fic has been a phenomenal read. from book one all the way to today, and all of the future's updates.
Frankly though... if i end up being correct, i will be just slightly irritated but also not very surprised. Here's hoping im wrong.
Damn.... Never expected Starlight to die like that....
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AMEN!!! Sad thing is there are also many annoying fanboys of her who want her to become an alicorn princess. Like seriously, why?
The fact that there are so many people who worship her and treat her like she is an amazing, well written character while completely ignoring the obvious issues she has is just mind boggling to me. Then again, never underestimate fandoms like these.
Awesome!
Whadya know, a higher functioning autistic that wasnt so traumatised she actually managed to go out and do something.
She couldnt even take out the planet properly. If she had been bothered to do her research she couldve found half a dozen ways of erasing reality as required without needing stupid amounts of personal power.
Then again, no story writer likes it when someone demonstrates a smartphone that runs CaOS.
She had super self levitation and shields in show, yet got taken out? How do we know she didnt do a frog orange and drop a substitute with her last spell while not so much teleporting as creating a healthy form out of sight?
Ahh, the dichotomy of absolute power. Do you do absolutely nothing, or do you :click: and do absolutely everything. All at once.
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It looks like whatever's causing the problem is being interpreted as each paragraph being indented by non-breaking spaces and separated by 4 newlines as plain text, and in HTML as having 2 line breaks as well as the normal paragraph vertical margin.
Just need to grab the .txt copy run a pair of regex replacements to normalise it. Then put the video back in.
(/\240/,)
(/\n{2,}/, \n\n)
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I have no idea what you just said to me. I’m not fluent in coding.
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Regex can get very complicated, but 2 two bits will automate the spacing fixes. The part between the /'s is the pattern to look for (\ means the next character(s) have a special meaning if letters/number or are literal if not), the other bit is what to replace the pattern with.
In the first one \240 is the character code for non-breaking space which is just removed.
In the second one \n is a newline with {2,} meaning 2 or more consecutive, this is replaced with just 2 newlines.
To make use of any of this you'll need an editor that supports regex (e.g. notepad++)
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Again, I have no idea what you’re talking about.
The moment I read the part about the walkie talkie behind the cake, I KNEW what was coming. And I enjoyed every bit of it.
Great chapter as always. Looking forward to the next one.
Sorry it took me so long in getting around to reading this.
Plans for Scootaloo? I must know! (But I'll wait )
Love the new suit.~
Starlight Glimmer... yikes!
Ah. Return of the Blueballs.
As always, looking forward to more!
-Ru
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Thanks. Was looking forward to hearing from you. If you have time, I'd love to hear your in-depth thoughts on this one.
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I suck XD. and i swear im goin blind lol
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You'll get it after a few more chapters. 12 to be exact.
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Dude did you just reply to a comment I sent literally over 3 years ago?
1.7 million... 1.7... million? 1,700,000........ This isn't a fan fiction, a narrative or even a story, ITS A LIFE COMMITMENT!!!
Well, that was an interesting was to conclude Starlight's cult. I actually enjoyed that.
I've been reading this on my Kindle for the past few days, and I must say, this "Human Into Equestria" story is a LOT more believable than the other ones I've read. Usually, the ones I read just pop the dude into Equestria, and within five minutes, he's fine with it. This one has a lot more emotion out of all the characters, and is much easier to understand from the characters POV. I am REALLY enjoying the story so far, and hope you continue it!
And I'd like to say on one occasion that James is an idiot for not figuring out that Twilight liked him. It was blatantly obvious, at least to me.
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The problems I'm having while reading this are the relatability to the main character and the reactions/ responses from the characters. In the 1st. Two chapters what I'm introduced to is an over weight,hairy, closet-furry with self-esteem issues whom also over exaggerates things by running away crying.
The second issue, the reactions and responses, is the pacing of relationship building in the early chapters. Rarity is blushing up a storm, fluttershy is being hand molested, and rainbow dash, whom has not had much positive or attractive interaction with the main character and was literally just insulted with fluttershy, said she would date him if he was more assertive.
I see this story is popular so I figure either you got better at character development or you pick up the pacing to overwhelm some of these issues. Not trying to be rude. I'm still gonna read more and it's your story. Just giving my opinion as a reader.
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I understand that you don’t relate to the type of person James is. Not everyone is a sensitive emotional type, but it relieves me that many other readers do understand what a person like him is coming from when thrust into an alien world with no knowledge of where he is or how to get home. You may not relate with him, but others do and it’s ok if you just can’t wrap your head around his mindset.
As for those three, I’ll explain them in order. With Rarity, she seems like the kind of person who is far more used to having her attire and professional Work praised than her own appearance. And the few who have praised her beauty, such as Hayseed Turniptruck in Sweet and Elite, tend to be cut and dry about it. It would likely be a very unexpected, yet much appreciated, change of pace for her to receive sincere compliments over her own physical beauty from a creature neither had ever seen before and could not relate to. James, as shown many times, has an appreciation of beauty that transcends his own species. Maybe being a “closet furry” helps with that.
As for Fluttershy, I’m not sure what you mean by “hand molested”. Do you mean how James frequently rubs and cuddles her while petting her? Fluttershy has shown herself to be someone who is always eager for a cuddle. And furthermore, it is scientifically proven that being pet genuinely feels good to animals. The ponies of Equestria are too developed to qualify as animals, but they likely feel just as much enjoyment from being pet as a feral horse.
As for Rainbow, that incident was the result of James trying to defuse an awkward moment between two friends he didn’t really know too well yet in a world whose society he was still figuring out. He promptly retracted his statement, with both sides understanding it was more of a case of culture shock than actual insulting. As for the claims of being willing to date him, Rainbow may have just been messing with him in a way she couldn’t really do before due to a lack of guy friends in her age group.
I appreciate the feedback and I hope this clears things up a bit. I hope you continue to enjoy whatever you can from my work, but I won’t fault you if you decide it’s just not for you.
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*Snorts.* Okay, that made me laugh.
Alrighty, just gonna ask a couple of questions out of genuine curiosity since this fic is so ubelieveably long.
1. Can anyone give me a brief sum up of the major plot points? Major villains, how they were beat, canon events changed or left the same, that sorta stuff.
2. More directed at the author, I'm wondering if you're aware of the fanfic Not the Hero and what your opinion of it is?
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1. A lot of slice of life with the protagonist adapting to Equestria and becoming friends with the Mane Six, a side plot of a building romance with Fluttershy, return of Nightmare Moon and the revelation of a seventh man-made Element, return of Discord with extreme emotional moments, and eventual war and the world's darkest hour.
2. I don't pay much mind to other fics. I focus on my own work.
I would like to know if there is a harem in this story because this story sounds like it's a possibility. If anyone can confirm that I would really appreciate it.
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No, a de facto harem or herd will not be formed. It’s.....complicated.
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Basically it's as complicated as The BlazBlue Bible; no one will understand it even if it's explained, just roll with it
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I know, but the point still stands. The 'amusement' boomerangs have a fair heft to them and they go fucking fast, so being hit in the head with one would cause pretty severe damage.
Getting hit in the head with a proper hunting boomerang would probably kill a person outright, so I suppose he got off lightly, but he still wouldn't be laughing about getting hit by the smaller one.
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If only everyone thought like you. This makes a lot of sense.
I'm genuinely scared to ask, but is it over?
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Nope. Just on hold until I finish proofreading and preparing Volume 2 for printing.
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Holy God. I'm reading Friendship is Scaleless, and that's only 400,000 words. What you have here good sir/ma'am is a monument of dedication here. 1.8 million words, from 2012 to 2017 (for now). Can't wait to read it.
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2011, to be exact. I had to migrate to this account after two others due to a hacking scandal 5 years back. You can thank Bloom here for that.
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Well, it's good to know that that didn't stop you. Good luck.
8768725 It's just something i've seen too often, and as the son of a grammar nazi.... It just kind of bugs me.
The story's still awesome so far, though.
I read a couple of chapters of this but lost interest cause of the crazy long chapters and reading what you did to Starlight just further discouraged me.
Still I respect you for the effort you clearly put into this.
I FOUND IT. I remember reading (part of) this story so long ago at an age i probably shouldn't have been reading this. Now the question is... do I try and start reading it again? Because holy balls that's a lot of words.
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Definitely.
Reading even one chapter may prove tedious at times, especially if you read them aloud :, but it is well worth it in the end. ✊
Speaking for myself, this is one of the first MLP fanfics I ever read back in the Spring of 2013. I will admit, it did have a few surprises, some that I wasn't okay with, but those pieces are minor compared to the big picture, and as a result, they're overshadowed. What can I say? Everyone has they're own opinions.
Not only that, but the characters practically match they're television counterparts to a T.....even Maud Pie. I knew that if anyone could write for her and match her character almost perfectly, he could.
I say, go for it.
To paraphrase two fictional characters I know, "you can do anything you want to, as long as you set your mind to it and have confidence in yourself."
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To be honest, I am very confident with myself when I say I understand how her mind works. I even have a future mini-sequel planned where she is one of the central leads.