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Luna's been a dreamwalker for a really long time. She's had to have seen a lot more than just some mild raunchiness in a tub. Everyone judging Estoc for his private dreams which he can't even help seems a little... unnecessary and mean.
7522020 Perhaps, but it was mostly something they couldn't have possibly anticipated. They probably won't bring it up or think about it later, though it was hard to not feel some minor irritation.
Good job with this chapter, it was nice to have nothing too exciting happen in this one, and also foreshadowing!
Double Diamond... Night Glider.... I have a feeling that Season 5 has just been foretold....
Ah... So we're doing the Cutie Map stuff without the actual Map. Well this will be interesting.
Also, this may just be the recently created Monster Hunter in me, but I can't help but see the Celestial Sword and Lunar Shield as a Charge Blade now that you're dropping hints of a Greatsword form.
I have a feeling that the next chapter will be about Starlight's equality cult. This aught to be good.
It also looks like he is remembering certain parts, or at least his mind is, of things that happened during the mortal chaos arc, I wonder why....
I always love to see updates for this story. I also like to see the romance between James and Celestia and Nightmare Moon. One question I have is why Luna doesn't seem to have developed feelings for James as well? I'm going off of the fact that Nightmare Moon and Luna were once one so wouldn't that mean that they have similar tastes in males? And since Nightmare Moon is deeply in love with James I figured that Luna would at least feel something for him.
7522139 Foretold as, the one they feared... In their tongue, it's Season 5... Communism!
7524339 Personally, I like his relationship with Luna. James doesn't need everyone pining for him and it's good to see him having a good friend he can always rely on.
7524691 while I wouldn't complain if their relationship was more romantic I'm not complaining in the least if they are just friends I was just trying to get some insight of the mind of the author
7524704 I wouldn't be too surprised if she did have some feelings for him but hides it due to knowing her sisters' feelings for him and his relationship with Fluttershy. Author knows best though.
Oh my god! XD I'm barely into the story and I'm dying. Poor Estoc.
a vary good chapter I really enjoyed it.
I am a bit surprised as to the Double Diamond, Night Glider season 5 reference from you Humanity and I am sure you know way as we have talked a few times about the show.
agene I must say a vary good chapter.
SO...
MUCH...
AWESOME!!!
I can't ever get enough of reading this story. Heck, I was re-reading it up until this chapter got posted! As always, looking forward to the next chapter(s).
-Ru
P.S.
Keep up the awesomeness, man! You're doing great!
7527331 Thank you. I feel bad that it took this long to get the next chapter up.
May I ask what the highlights of this chapter was? I have no idea what to think of this one in the end.
"Merry Christmas Everypony!" jeez has Pinkie Pie been inhaling a sh*tload of Gingerbread cookies to steal Earth's holiday name in Equestria, which a BILLIONS of space miles away from each other, or did she appear and done all craziness as Deadpool did on some chapters?
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james told pinkie a bit about christmas earlier.
how is it possible for a person to write a story over the course of four years and remain a less than mediocre author
7534532 I'd take offense to that if your user page and personal group didn't reveal you to be just another troll lurking on the Internet. So no offense taken.
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that's good to hear, it's never fun when someone's genuinely upset
if you would like, I can go out on a limb and advise you a bit with the whole writing thing, since I can see you are very passionate about your work. Not much on grammar and that sort of stuff, mostly with the essentials of building an enjoyable narrative that is constructed in a way that is pleasant to read and does not break immersion, to generalize.
Of course, if you would rather not then I understand. I know a lot of people who prefer to work independently, and I would not wish to detract from what they enjoy doing.
7534906 Look, I want to apologize for reporting your secondary account. With your first comment coming off as rather snarky, I thought you were just someone asking for trouble while trying to get a rise out of me. You've proven yourself otherwise and I'm sorry I responded as drastically as I did.
7533032 ooohhhh we have a Bad ass overhere
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too late, now you've invoked my ire
7538473 If that's how it's going to be, I'm sorry it's come to this.
Also, just to make it clear, using an alternate account to get around a block is never a good idea. If it was due to a misinterpretation over intentions with your primary account, you should make it clear immediately that you mean no harm when you make contact with another account.
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I got lost with no idea where I was, with people I didn't recognize, all of whom even LOOKED evil, while he was trapped in a world with magical talking ponies that barely even approached him.
Dude's a bitch.
7541206 So you basically call anyone a bitch who;
Appears in uncharted territory
Surrounded by sentient ponies who are the dominant race
No human contact around
You're the only person who stands out as much as a bottle of Coke Cola in an aisle of Ginger Ale
And have basic normal reactions when you're lost, scared, and alone?
So what does that make you who are none of those things; A rejected member of Jersey Shore?
I FOUND YOU! XD-385!
Have a nice day!
7549776 I feel like I recognize your username from somewhere. Have we met? DeviantART, maybe?
I read your fanfics on fanfiction.net, I was one of the reviewers and yes the same username.
I just wanna say, hi. And I admire your work, that I began to write my own fanfics. It will be pretty tough for me to match up to yours and others, but I couldn't get this fantasy out of my head.
Hope this isn't too much but, again I admire your work. Thanks!
Can't wait for the next chapter
7541206 Are you dumb? Every single one of us who has been a child, (which is all of us), has been in the same situation.
Please get common sense, and besides, I would be freaked out too if I was suddenly in the world of talking ponies, away from everything I care about. Now imagine those ponies being realistic looking... Fucking terrifying.
Man. It has been so long since I read the first chapter. I found this story on Fanfiction, and at the time it stopped at chapter 27. I've read since, but your story was the one that introduced me to FiMFiction. I owe you several things for that.
First step on memory lane... James.
James is the ultimate Hero archetype. That's bold, coming from me, but I believe it to be true. He does it all, and more.
I was constantly rooting for him through and through. He feels as I myself had as a child, but more mature, stronger in will, and in strength when need be.
I've rooted. I've cheered. I've cried in happiness. I've cried in sadness. I gushed in pride. I've laughed in joy, and hilarity. I've watched the villains rise, fall, and get up with a hand. And every moment I felt as though I was there to see it.
All I have to say is thanks. Thanks for James and the friends he makes out of everyone. Thanks for the thrills. Chills. Spills. Laughs. Love. Love to hate. Love to love. Friendship. Hardship. All of it that is "The Lost Element".
Good night.
7587360 It's an honor to hear such strong praise from you. If you have anything else to share, it would be a pleasure.
7587645 This story actually made me come to FiMFiction as well! The character and James and his opinion on the world opened my eyes to reality! I'm glad that i read the story! Touches my heart, forever!
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If I shared it all, or even a little, I would do a five minute rant, on how awesome it is.
I had to stop myself from going too far without losing focus on the best parts.
Oh, I'll get to it, but I think I'll do it a chapter at a time.
And not while I'm doing a test in class.
But yeah, Humanity. Anytime.
7588127 No problem. Take your time. It'll be a pleasure to read it. And feel free to mention anything I can improve on.
7588467 Ello again, been a couple weeks, any news on the new chapter or when it may come out?
I've been wondering what it means when an author's name is crossed out like that.
7619847 No one is asking you to like everything he says or does you know, it's all interpretation to each their own how you view it, this is some flaws the writer has pointed out compared to a peaceful world such as Equestria.
I want to find the version of hush now quiet now in this story but looking at all the chapters makes me not want to look through them and every chapter that i did look through made me think it wasnt this story. I still love this story and read every update when I get the chance.
7625769 You can find it near the end of Volume 2's final chapter. The second half of Closing the Year.
7610117 It's means the user has been banned, even if temporarily. I can tell you more in private if you want. It's risky talking about it out here due to the person behind it being quick to abuse the report system. He's gotten me temp banned around half a dozen times just for standing up to his crap.
7602731 It's in the works and I'm making steady progress. I think it'll be a fun read.
7591389 Sincerest apologies for taking so long to get around to replying, but due to a delusional hostile narcissistic manchild on the site who is just begging to have his info wind up on Encyclopedia Dramatica (you know who you are) and a number of the site's own moderators coming down with a crippling case of "Repeatedly and Consistently Getting the Wrong Guy", I got slapped with a two week ban. Really makes me long for the days of when I was active on DeviantART, a website run by people who are efficient, competent, and responsible in dealing with pretentious and unstable members repeatedly starting trouble or raising hell wherever they go. Man, those were the days. Never before have I felt such contempt and disappointment towards people who run a site I love to use. Only thing stopping me from going back to DA is a lingering archaic and unreasonable size limit placed on text document uploads.
Anyway, on to responding to each point you established.
1. Well, this was the very first chapter I ever wrote upon deviating from the unprofessional 3rd person style of narrative I had been using for the previous five years. I was not expecting it to be without kinks. Seriously, if you want to see how I wrote before, just google Rukario Romance or Forbidden Love by XD-385.
Not really sure what else to say regarding this part aside from the fact that my writing in this style was still a little rough around the edges.
2-3. Thank you. I was trying to go with a completely outside perspective on the descriptions along with the building uncanny uncomfortableness that comes from an adult watching something clearly meant for a far younger audience. I'm sure you've felt that yourself at certain times in your life.
4. I understand your complaint. I do strive for a very realistic take on everything that happens, though I may be willing to bend that rule if the realism could get in the way of the narrative, not to mention finding himself suddenly getting hurt to the point of potentially spilling a bit of blood could really escalate the situation James was in to a very uncomfortable level. At least that early in the chapter with so many watching. Kind of like how most times a pony in the show has something fall on them to the point of being knocked to the ground and getting up with no visible damage, I felt an occasional narrow escape from external injury could be acceptable and be passed off as the recipient of the incident just getting lucky. Doesn't happen often in my works, but I don't regret it either.
Thank you for your time. I'd love to hear more from you. It can be either here or in private, I'll get back to you as soon as I can.
7625951 Oh ok. Thank you. The thing is those were some of the chapters I was almost sure it wasn't in so thank you for the help.
7625958 Got any spoilers or hints I can read, or must I wait?
7625991 Three words.
Guys. Night. Out.
Oh, and two more.
Surprise. Cameo.