A long forgotten element has been brought back, but for better or for worse?
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Swiggity Swooty, he's coming for dat booty.
This is up there as some of your better work so far.
I love what you've done with Rain Shine, first off. The power she demonstrated with her nature magic makes me excited to see her in battle, as hesitant as she is to face against her kin. She is also, of course, adorable. Also though, her presence significantly shifts the balance of things in Equestria's favor even further. The Emperor would have to pull out some real nasty tricks to stand a chance now, which leaves me all the more intrigued.
I like how you handled introducing Ocellus into the gang. Horse racism is still alive and well unfortunately, though no one even needed to sing a song this time to calm them down.
That talk with Sky Beak was highly touching, especially considering recent real-world events. The bond that's forming between them is extremely wholesome, and I'm happy to see more of it in the future.
Changeling love-drunk James scares me. Good thing it doesn't scare Novo.
Novo is still best woman for James. Even if the guy has a wife and kids, I'm still supporting MILF mom.
James clearly wants a lot of kids, and Birds give plenty of them
I don't think this story is a Equestria at War story based on the fact it began in 2012.
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A war is the central plotline of Volume 5, which is currently underway. The cover art even conveys it.
Another Mary Sue main character.
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Yep. Watch as he bends Equestria to his will as he ascends to the pantheon of the gods, a mortal made divine to reign over even the royals of royalty. Bow before man made god and his eternal superiority!
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Lol all your missing is a black and red alicorn who knows everything and fucks as he pleases
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True. Unless you wanna go total hax with a triple-horned alicorn.
Well...let me tell you, I did not expect Rain Shine to come and aid the war effort. I guess that she just couldn't stay away knowing what James and Nightmare Moon were going up against; some form of trouble. Finding out who was behind the attacks really threw her for a loop. At least she took some comfort in knowing that the Emperor's daughter didn't falter in the end and fought to defend their home.
Speaking of her, it was quite clever how her real name was Margaret with 'Megan' only being a nickname.
Rain Shine truly knows how to fight back against her opponents, doesn't she? Bending nature's plant-life at her will so intensely. I wonder if the other kirin in her village are capable of such might. Dragon Lord Ember put up a good fight, though, and it seems that they will be gaining a lot of knowledge from each other.
I thought that it was a little odd how James just let Smolder and Ocellus come with him when Rain Shine was detected, given the dangers out there. Anyway, it was nice of Rain Shine to keep the little changeling's secret under wraps.
Again with those bellflowers. "Magic Railroad" vibes again. (Sparkle, sparkle, sparkle) ✨🚂🚃🚃✨
That was a nice, tender moment that James and Sky Beak shared. Those two get closer everyday. And it was nice of Terramar and Silverstream to send James a care-package of sorts. I wouldn't be surprised if very little goes to waste on Capricorn Island.
I can say similar words about Rain Shine's budding relations with Queen Novo. I have a feeling that those two will get along swimmingly (no pun intended ).
Who would've thought that the kirin chieftain herself would fall for James? It's good that he didn't just jump into it and that Rain Shine has the patience to wait. She's also rather supportive of James' relationships, which is positive reinforcement for him.
It's sad that Ocellus needs to be reminded of how good she is so often, but on the bright side, it's continuous positive reinforcement to her new beginning. She certainly needed that when she was finally introduced to James' circle of friends. Based on their past experience, I don't entirely blame them for being hostile at first, especially Twilight Sparkle; it was her brother's wedding day that was almost wreaked after all, not to mention how close Queen Chrysalis got to him.
Still, at least three of them made an effort to give the little "love bug" a chance. It was certainly a brave move on Twilight's part.
So, Novo's shipping out and the war encampment is on the move. I can only wonder what they will find next.