A long forgotten element has been brought back, but for better or for worse?
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I feel like flutter shy would have joined the war effort regardless of a child or others telling her to stay away. It almost feels like it's betrayal of her helpful and kind nature. I wonder how the war go down considering how long to prep time chapter have been.
James is showing remarkable restraint in preventing his new relationships from progressing too quickly. If you had written this ten years ago, he'd probably already be discussing having kids with Ember and Rain Shine lol
This chapter feels like the last bit of prelude before something. It's got the same vibe as Pink With a Chance of Chocolate, like everyone knows something is about to go wrong. It's definitely past due for another battle at any rate.
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The element of kindness (who yes stood up to a dragon when it was roaring at her friends) abandoning her own flesh and blood child, and adopted child as well? Yeah, she wouldn't. To do so would be depriving a child of months of time without either parents, simply leaving them in the care of a friend, What if both were to fall in combat? What if both were to never make it home for whatever reason? Condemning a child to a life without parents who would happily love and raise them is not a kindness.
*sigh*
Another one for the Absolutely Disgusting group. Though, if there was a group called Cringe Goldmine, it'd be in there first.
I'll keep reading, if only for my own amusement. But, I'd be lying if I say I wasn't happy I could write much better and with more tact than this drivel. I do, actually, on another website. Anyway.
I so wish I had more time to write to the extent you do, and I honestly can't figure out how this story got as popular as it did. There are really no words, just constant face palms. I guess is says alot that this story lost viewers over the years. I even caught a comment comparing this to Past Sins.
No.
I just can't express my disappointment and utter disgust. Just hollowness is left. Though, I'll always be happy to know I'll always be a better writer than you. This story gives me a comfort of what knowing what not to do when writing a story. So, thanks for that.
I can't stand when people get infamous from mediocrity or they shill or defend said mediocrity. Well, guess even that time of infamy has passed for you.
Unless you add a fetish tag, please keep all your kinks and imaginative desires out of your writing. As a woman, I can tell that at least by the beginning you had never had a relationship with a woman or interacted with one at the time, and that the Mane 6 were an outlet for your inner frustrations. Again. Add a fetish tag of that's the case.
But like I said earlier, I'll keep reading. See how far I can make it, but I doubt I can make it to the end.
And regardless of how you defend it, a normal person doesn't like chapters that are over several thousand words (unless they are good writers, which you aren't), let alone ones that are fucking 20k + words. For real?
The same goes for imbedding music and videos. It disrupts the flow of already shitty chapters and no one needs to know what music you were inspired by. Stop associating good works of art with crap like this.
This is a train wreck, and I may not stick around to watch it continue crashing in every single damn thing on the tracks. So...good for us both, right?
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The increased publicity is appreciated. If I’m entertaining someone, even if ironically, then mission accomplished.
Although your complaints over music tracks occasionally being embedded in my chapters is easily the pettiest gripe I have ever received. If that’s really such an issue, take it up with Knighty and his colleagues. I’m not the one who coded the site into allowing embedded content in stories. Very rarely does a specific song inspire a scene in my works. I simply choose a song that fits the situation. The embedded soundtracks in my chapters serve as background music in the same way the show’s own musical score does. I’m astounded that never once crossed your mind.
And I’m sorry to say you’ve got no business complaining about the length of my story when there are roughly six other stories on the site that are even more egregious offenders. Start with Diaries of a Madman and work your way down from there.
The “fetishes” complaint is also rather ironic when you yourself are in a group for a specific fetish. And a rather ridiculous fetish at that. Hide your own power level before accusing me of writing anything built around advocating for any of my kinks. Which I can assure you are much tamer and more reasonable than yours. I don’t join groups geared toward fetish fics specifically to not be associated with clopfic writers.
Looking through the majority of the group forums you associate yourself with, I can see you are an exceedingly jaded and cynical (and spiteful if your post on my user page is any evidence) individual with very strong biases in general while clearly displaying a form of tunnel vision in your observations. I do appreciate the publicity, but I must take your words with a grain of salt. It is a rare day when someone like you comes along in the comments here and I’ve learned to just roll with it.
PS: I don’t buy for a second that you’re a woman. And assuming that I haven’t had any experience with women is a lie when I’ve stated elsewhere my experiences in romance. The entire reason I even had the relationship aspect veer into polyamory in time was because personal experiences proved my original assumptions about monogamy wrong. If you are really a woman, I have to assume you’ve experienced some horrifying trauma that has left you a very bitter person with no joy left in your heart. If that’s the case, I pity you.
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Bold of you to say how bad it is when I've seen a whole bunch of other fics eons worse then this story, so saying how "I'll be a better writer" or some shit, sorry ma'am, but you can go off and Karen somewhere else with your 'Holier then Thou' tropey self where we enjoy some good writing while you're fixated on this basic normal story and turning a blind eye from fics that are extremely heavy in fetish fuel you clearly haven't seen.
Have a good day, and keep your Karen energy anywhere else who would actually give a single care.
2million+ words Jesus Christ I remember reading this back on FanFiction….good god man….
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It’s come a long way, hm?
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I’d like to think so but I fell off just after the whole Discord revenge hospital arc. Tho I’ll have to catch back up now…….
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You won’t be disappointed.
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My Little review & Feedback I did your review. A Newcomer in Equestria - In Good Company (only) . Chapter 1 - 106 (only)
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Many thanks. If it helps, the volumes are listed under the story description. Most actually appreciate the background music I embed into the chapters, so unless the majority of readers request I leave them out, I’ll continue to include them where I think they fit. Assuming they actually stay up on YouTube.
Though please keep in mind The Lost Element has a short prequel as well, if you’d like to inspect that too.
I don't have much to say this time around. It could be due to the nature of this chapter.
It's interesting how Rain Shine is able to pass her emotional power onto others be means of touching them. Something similar can be said about the Element of Humanity's power on James' armor and how he can show others in the same manner.
It's nice to see how both Shining Armor and Twilight Sparkle are coming around to Ocellus. I wasn't too surprised about Twilight seeing a connection with the young changeling through literature. When it came to the Student/Young Six, I easily considered Ocellus to be the 'Twilight' of the group.
James connections with Rain Shine and Ember continue to develop. I'm interested in seeing where they will go once the war is over, but it's too soon to jump into those.
Moving on.