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So many lols in here!
Awesome work as always, keep it up!
Curses! Didn't get first post!
Awesome job as usual! More please?
-Ru
What the hell?? Loving it!!!!!!
Holy Jesus... Those references!
Well, glad to see things are working out for the better. Keep up the good work.
Of course, now that Pinkie knows her alternate form in extreme detail, especially her James bra, she will be able to prank Lyra by switching to and fro.
I can see Pinkie doing a Portal Tree drop now, swapping between mare and human with each pass, finishing off with a Talkie Toaster and suprised Discord.
How long before Twilight makes sure she has a ready supply of dose and counter dose so she can do detailed experiments int the capabilities of female humans. At first hand?
Poor Spike, on seeing the far more dragon shaped human Rarity.
Amazing chapter! I can't wait 'til the baby is born.
(//-_Start_-//)
-ton...is it on?
"It should be."
Alright. Reverb and I thought we should do some after-chapter commentary, sum up how we felt.
"I'm lucky to be non-living. The sheer amount of chaos would have given me an aneurism."
Don't be so dramatic. So we get a nice wakeup, besides construction crews making a racket. And the two lovebirds are hinting at later. Hmph.
"Sugarcube is out of commission for today? Shame. Looked forward to seeing ponies from the cold wander in and order a treat."
He wrote it as it is. Besides, I figured he'd have someone else in store instead, as a result. And boy, did we get just that.
"As soon as Pinkie showed up, we had our suspicions. Not ultra predictable, we just know the signs. We though she'd get into minor trouble or something else would occur."
And that it did. More humans? Good grief XD.
"You let the emotion capture on."
Leave it, it helps.
Excellent job with Pinkie exploring her new form. Saves us the trouble of taking apart how she'd figure it out. And how she... *ahem*... explored herself... it would make Noble proud.
"Yes, so classy, wasn't it?"
Mmm, yes, quite. Now for the references. One "Mr. Bean"? Check. Bad Mario game? Check. Matthew Humphrey? Check. Huh. "Equestria Girls" dress? Check. Sexy Sax? Cheeeck. I must wonder what went through your head, Humanity.
"Pinkie going fully absurd with today's chapter made my motherboard fry."
I should be the one suffering more than you, in that case. I made the mistake of drinking while reading this. And we'll wrap this up with a steamy human sex scene. Classy, and well deserved after James' teases all of that day.
"Let us hope that Fluttershy cannot do what Pinkie did with-"
Oh, we're out of time. Check the reco-
(//-_End_-//)
aww a vary sweet chapter.
7127465 Eventually, though may I ask for what you found to be the standouts of this chapter? With all the crap happening to me over the last eight weeks, finishing this chapter was a drawn out struggle.
7128923 Sorry to hear about that.
What stood out? Hmm...
I wasn't expecting Pinkie to play with her funbags and be flashing them around every chance she got. Not really surprising that she did, just unexpected.
Love Rarity's first guess about Pinkie:
Priceless.
The part where James trolls Pinkie and Lyra about the human rules.
Enjoyed the bit of tension at the lake. And Pinkie still being Pinkie, even when suffering from hypothermia.
The scene in front of the fireplace. Soo cute!
I should've seen the signs for the bedroom scene. I am dense. Felt the love between those two, though.
I enjoyed Pinkie just being Pinkie. And getting to see her softer side as well.
Always a pleasure, honor, and privilege to read, give feedback, and support in any way I can!
Let me know if there's anything else I can do, or anything you'd like to know.
Stay awesome, my friend!
-Ru
To stick with the undertake theme here..
7128923 great chapter man. Enjoyed it as much as i do all of your chapters. Sorry lifes a bitch to u, ik that feeling. Keep up the good fight and don't let anything stop u from writting your story masterpiece!
7128923 another EPIC and sidesplitting , gut-spilling , pants-wettingly funny chapter! Glad you are ok after the past 2 months, my friend!
Best wishes from Britain.
Benjamin Perks
7132871 Here here ! XD
7140140 I tried looking around and it seems to be a matter of preference.
7146963 I wasn't mocking people with diabetes. It was inspired by some very sad Pinkie Pie comics I saw and I wanted to address the danger of diabetes with such a scene. If anyone is in danger of getting it, it's Pinkie Pie.
7169994 Really didn't need to see that after today.
7171079 I know. I feel for the author though. That story is in its own category. It's basically one drawn out therapy session.
I just want to say that this is the most amazing fan fiction that I have ever read and I'm hardly containing myself as I wait for more content. I love it, keep up the good work mate!
Humanity i think you got wrong grammar at Chapter 3: Sweet Deals.
I recalled something about snake anatomy. “Fluttershy… Snakes don’t have ears. They can’t hear anything, not even the sound of a flute.”
I looked on while Fluttershy seemed surprised by my revelation. “They are?"
Don't you mean they CAN'T, not ARE?
Chapter 7: Risks of Exotic Romance
Rarity smiled as she took a seat just to my left and proceeded to explain things. “Today marks the first full week since you appeared in Equestria. You came here with virtually nothing, but now look how far you’ve come in just a paltry seven days!"
In response to my friends’ words, I smiled warmly. “No… I’m the one who should be grateful. Like Rainbow said, I had nothing when I came to Equestria."
wrong person mate.
Good job with this Humanity, I always enjoy your story here, and cant wait for then next one, if you need an idea, have twilight have an explosive accident with the potion and turning all of ponyville into humans, it could be hilarious.
7211634 I appreciate the suggestion, though I already have an explosive accident in store for volume 5 with unexpected results.
7211684 I look forward to it, and I know you wont dissapoint
... ... ... Nope. Gave it a try, didn't like it.
7212517 I understand. Still, thank you for at least giving my story a fair chance.
7211684 any hints?
Sweet Deals: Rarity: “Sweetie Belle! You’ll be late if you don’t hurry!” and “I’m afraid it’s a little late for breakfast, James. It’s past 11.” isn't Sweetie Belle late for school? XD
7230069 Not sure how I missed that. Made a slight adjustment there.
7232418 :P
7232418
and in "Finding My Place" you didn't describe Big Macintosh's cutie mark XD
Man, if i didn't know any better, i'd think i might be good at spotting errors in your story
Man, I've had to put off from reading this chapter for waaay too long. I would've read it sooner but school made me read To Kill a Mockingbird and made me make a lot of homework. But anyways, I finally read it and, I have to say, I'm kinda disappointed, sadly enough.
However, that's not to say it's a bad chapter! It's still pretty good, just not what I've grown to expect from you, then again, it might just be due to personal taste. I guess I just prefer the cool events like comic characters coming to real life over Slice of Life, and I'm not a big fan of smut, even though it was very well described, as anything you write. :P
Overall, I think it was a chapter of average quality, which didn't really appeal to my personal tastes. I'm looking forward to the next chapter, and we'll see how that does it for me! :3
Well just found this story and its 1,417,693 words. I'm going in wish me luck I don't know when I'll see light again.
7211684 Out of curiosity, how long does it take to make new chapters for you, if you would like to say. Also, I am slightly impatient, may I please have a hint on the next chapter?
7259604 You will probably like this story, it may take a while though.
7273605 Hearths Warming Eve.
7273715 Ah okay then, may be fun
7294112 Not really. The first chapter of the sequel can be read without spoilers. Hence why I posted it.
7305943 The next chapter is underway, but the story itself won't be completed for a long time.
I'm going to assume due to a lack of a response that your not going to do anything more with discord...
Ok, that's fine.
No.
Please:
Go ahead and kill off permanently a reality-warping immortal that was made into a semi-immortal, who is also a physical manifestation of disorder.
With nothing but a flaming sword and a pretty little shield.
And Lite edition, dust sized cosmic fireworks. In version Alpha 0.1.
Protected by magic proof armor, that shouldn't be able to protect the face or the internal organs from magic, but blocks it regardless.
(Because apparently magic can now be blocked like an arrow, and it doesn't have the ability to just surround and pick out every crevice of an entity).
Blessed with discord not simply changing the magic withing the armor.
Or disregarding the rules altogether.
Or simply changing reality itself around the forth god eater.
Please. do tell me how mister James managed to eat discord without it backfiring horribly, or becoming something between discord and a human, or something else.
Do tell how he managed to defeat him without attracting the attention of other things in such domains. Or whatever spawned discord to begin with, if he had a creator.
Please do tell how James was able to overcome what might have been:
[] A ~ A hex from beyond the grave/A final curse/Karma from a concept embodying spirit.
[] B ~ Discords internal defenses responding to a being having eaten him.
[] C* ~ A biological instance of resurrection trough sacrifice.
[] D* ~ You kill it, you buy it.
[] E ~ Something to do with the black sludge of concentrated pain and edge. And the mind probably within it.
* = Discord willing it not required, see B and/or E.
I can't get over this.
JAMES USED A BIT OF HOT METAL TO KILL A CONCEPT THAT WAS BROUGHT TO LIFE AND GIVEN FLESH.
AND THEN ATE HIM.
RECEIVING ONLY A COMA, A BIT OF DEPRESSION, AND THE EQUIVALENT OF GETTING TERMINAL CANCER WHICH GETS CURED AT THE LAST SECOND BY THE POWER OF FRIENDSHIP.
7307330 Did you ever get around to reading Bedlam's Requiem? If not, I suggest you do so and finish the current volume. And I'm not commenting on anymore of this Discord drama because it's already been put to bed and there's nothing else I can say about it. Please do not poke at the embers.
I really wanted to read this but now that I see that it almost has one and a half million words I'm not so sure LOL but can anyone tell me who the romantic interest is before I spend the next four months trying to catch up
7308554 It's Fluttershy.
Hey just a safe note: Please consider changing the parts about diabetes, at least change or take out the misunderstandings spewed by acid members and failed reporting(Getting it by eating too much sugar is slightly false.). While some may see your references to the memes harmless, others may not. I know there aren't really many that may care about it. I do, I really wish the memes would go away, Because truthfully what ever source motivated you to include the cringe memes in some parts of your story are wrong. I'm only concerned about people reporting it because they're offended enough to report it for "targeting a target audience."
There has been a group going around trying to take certain sites down just because they didn't like it. I know this community has established and relatively has nice people or bronies/pegasisters but that doesn't mean a newer fan will understand the same cultural understanding the mlp community built oh so long ago.
If you have any question about Diabetes Type One or Two please feel free to ask me. I have 16 years of actual facts and research under my belt.
7311929 Sure. What parts should I edit?
7312467 Oh boy urk uh... *starts to look though story again for the 5th time* ... I'm not that great on editing advice. So I'm unsure when I do pick it out I will be able to help change it to sound better. I guess i self volunteered my self to do that. Here's a line form "From Bud to bloom"
Where you say they body will no longer produce insulin if you eat too much sugar is false... what you're saying is you get Type 1 from that method... which is wrong. It's called Juvenile diabetes for a reason. Mostly because the youth get it commonly (ages Newborn to 18). In vary rare occasions some people may get it after a sugary that involves any invasive procedures around the pancreas. While it's only slightly true what the media says about type 2 most of the time. High sugar, Not carbohydrates, value items are one of those "added bonuses" to those who may get type 2 because unhealthy eating habits. Type 1 is a in inherited disease most of the time, not including times after sugary, On the same standpoint type 2 is also an inherited disease, while the chances are low, there is a near 10%(direct heritage) chance more if you have someone in your family has it.
While these parts are true for type ones. It just doesn't translate to a proper "oh hey look an obscure meme reference." While some type diabetics do use needles or what some people call the "eppy pen"(which in all cases it's not one). Other people use insulin pumps(way too many of them to mention) which do the exact same thing as needles except they need to poke them selves with a needle every time they need it. How ever they do need to change it every two to three days, give or take on site issues.
Again I'm not to sure how to properly go about this issue and I'm very unsure how I would change it to make it sound like it'll not target a target audience. I'll search for more and try to help.
7312734 I've edited the discussion. I hope it comes off better now.
7316071 It does getting a doctors opinion is always great. Thank you for understanding :D because sadly most people don't.
By the way your story is good.
7316123 Thank you. I'll be trying to start getting it printed tomorrow.