Beautiful appsulitle beautiful I love it!!!!!!

I am not one that really knows how to put in to words the feeling that this chapter gave me but.......I'll TRY

I rest my case........LOL

Wow! So far this is pretty good. I personally think James is more than qualified to have Rarity as lover as well as Fluttershy. I hope to see them starting a herd in the near future.

I really liked it.
It adds to the possibilities of a Harem or a love battle the changeling queen could use against them.

its nice having another pov now and then i liked this chapter

4010291 that would be great, except he doesn't panic in the next chapter or the one after.

That was nice.

Hey this looks like a story I could get into. Damn these chapters are long as fuck.

This was pretty good. Another POV to view from. Seeing things as to not start a herd, I would personally see it stay that way. But this story is beyond my control.

Reason why I don't want to see it happen is because Equestria is full of intelligent sentient equines. Compared to Earth, this is not exactly the place to "Screw things around."

Straying from the topic, I think this would be rather interesting to see some more POVs from the other 5 in the later chapters.

4010291 forcing yourself to stay calm might be for the best at first. No telling what a sudden freak out could trigger in the natives.

*pre read* 600k words *cheer like a school filly version of discord*... 55k a single chapter... tsud *falls unconscious*

4011016
Another day at the office for FiMFiction, really. Does he arrive in the Everfree and end up at Fluttershy's cottage? That would be the traditional course of events.

4011187 Oh god, that's funny. Very sorry about that one. I shocked the hell out of myself when I saw the word count after uploading it.

4011373 maybe it would be funnier if you attached more description to how he said it? Idk, it just wasn't that witty for me. It also kind of bugs me that having spent less than four hours in his presence Rainbow Dash is interested in him. He spent an hour of that crying! Maybe if she was into being the protective lead, but then I realized that by the end of this he is probably going to be super powerful, and that would Mess that up.

4011409 Interested in him? She was just messing with him. She does seem like the kind of girl who would like to rile a guy up.

I am really hoping this doesn't turn into a harem. Mind you, I'm certainly not against the idea. If I was, there'd be a few people on my end who'd have a word or two with me. Just... I think I'd prefer reading a HiE story (my least-liked category of MLP fiction) where the human guy didn't amass a herd. The only times you really see that are A: When the writer is just focusing on their personal waifu. Or B: The writer has experienced the dangers and troubles of a polygamous relationship.

Be nice for a breath of fresh air, really. Try something new.

Whoa whoa whoa!

XD? As in the XD-305 or what ever your name is from SF?

I recognize this story. I've read every chapter so far on the other site. You've been on this site for how long and I only just now found you here?

Do you have any idea how many times I wanted to ask you if you had Fimfic account on SF? Glad to know you're here though.

Huh well what do you know. Where's that follow button...

4011661 don't worry. This chapter was partially written to make clear that the harem path will not be taken.

Hmm... description gives me the impression of all those mary-sue alicorn OC self-inserts, but the feedback you've been getting says otherwise. I suppose I'll just have to read it and find out.

4011685 Lol, it's a pleasure to talk to you. I would love to hear any feedback you may have for the chapters.

4011979

lol

My friend...as I'd like to call you that, I've followed you on SF for awhile now, and you've got a loyal follower in me now here on Fimfic.

I honestly could never find anything wrong with your writing. And I don't believe I have any right to tell you what you should do with your writing. Well other then your kinda silly, derpy attempt to change the ship from Flutters to Rares. But that's just me.

4012433 Yes, that is certainly how most would act when placed suddenly in a new environment. But when the environment is far more supportive and exponentially universally more pleasant than Earth could ever be, it is quite possible that some may warm up to their new surroundings in a relatively short amount of time. Especially when someone is more laid back than others and a bit more willing to go with the flow of things.

Still, I respect your views and thank you for giving this story a chance.

*EDIT*

Actually, I think this sums up my words even better than I could word them.

very interesting I think you should keep this chapter up

4012657 Thanks. I will. I know this one was very short, but may I ask what you enjoyed from it?

4012673 the length because my brain didn't overload and also that its a little bit helpful on how exactly Fluttershy feels about James and rarity

watch and then comment

I read the description and was like, "oh, this will be good!" then I glanced at the word count, and did a double take...
This is going to take a while to read... but it will be read!

4013052 watch my video and be amazed

Yes I think that you should leave it up. It develop the characters nicely. It add more to that story and makes the character more believable. If this develops in this direction, you have your work cut out for your self.

I know that I have stated this before but I think I will repeat sum of it again.

We are toking about Equestria. Pony's, they are related to horses at sum point in time. we are toking about exploring herd dynamics. You can write this in to the story that a pony can form a herd. That it's an old law, over a 1000yr old. in time It fell out of use. Of cores, if James or Fluttershy and Rarity use this law it wood lead Rainbow Dash, Twilight, Princess Nightmare Moon and Princess Luna into hoping for there chance. this wood lead to a lot of confusion for James. He Love all the girls and wood hate to hurt them. It wood be fun to see him muddle threw and do his best for all of them.
This mite leave and opening for Queen Chrysalis. We know that she has been keeping an eye on James. She mite try seducing James for his strong Love or replace him for the girls. Then again this is your story not mine.

Can a changeling imitate a human?

Dragonfox

4013115 read this for an anser

4013106
I watched it before I comented. If you need to read any of the story to get the joke, I didn't get it. If not, it went right over my head.

4013133 Well, that may be how it works in that story, but in this one Chrysalis is the only Changeling capable of taking on bipedal forms.

4013160 its nothing to do with the story it was just me being a troll cause you got rickroll'd

4013296
Jokes on you! I like that song!

Holy crap that's a lot of words! This is coming from a guy who doesn't like to read any fanfics more than 10,000 words long. But this does look good...I'm torn! Should I read it..or not...Don't tell me i can figure this out on my own...I hope....

4014202 If this helps you decide, there is a bookmark feature for this site.

4013133

I have taken the time to read War was all we knew and it gives a way for the changeling to look like humans. If this is the way you are having the changeling use this ability in your story, so be it. I was just trying to work out the way changeling operate in your story.

Dragonfox

Those poor pansies.

4013316 damn

4016308 its not my story its just that it was a good story that might answer your question

4016675 Oh, they should be ok. I've used hot water before to water plants. Just as long as it only touches the soil at first, it'll cool fast enough to not cause harm.

4018446 Um... Maybe edit the comment when on a computer? Not entirely sure what you were trying to say.

4018038

Thank you for the story you have suggested. It was a good one and sorry for the reply, I mistook you for the Author of this story.

Dragonfox

Interesting....and to be honest, a nice insight into what the others are up to when James isn't around. I am glad however that they were able to have a civilized discussion...most others would've probably had the conversation end in a different manner..and not a particularly pleasant or helpful one either.

In my opinion (for what its worth....I am pretty sure its worth a bit more than the dust bunnies in the corner) I think you should keep the chapter around, but truly in the end that's your call.

4025470 After the pleasant feedback I've gotten, I think I will and will keep it as a canon chapter.

4028653 Good luck trying that without tossing the thing and putting somepony's eye out.

This dude has all the mares after him :/

4032797 All? Which ones make 'all'?

4032829 all makes all. Dem bitches love him xD

4018832 that's k