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new chapter!
and other 45k one
Goodbye homework
Hello reading
3189726 This is actually the real 12th chapter. Finally glad to have this one out of the way. Now its onto the rest of Volume 2.
*sees new chapter*
*~SQUEEEEEE~*
*sees word count*
FUCK!!!
.....lets do this
45k......
3189804 Ohohohoo! Reactions like that make my day.
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im good at that
3189917 in all seriousness though, let me know how it is when done.
Jesus Christ!
This took me an hour to bloody read!
Tis a very good chapter, I enjoyed it immensely
So when's the next chapter/volume coming? Soon, next year or never?
3190385 of course it is. Pinkie Pie was just being herself. Random.
During the reading I switched between this:
And this:
Both on a loop...
;-;
to be honest i think the chapter should have been split, just a bit to long, and while normally length is good, this was a very monotonous chapter
3190614 That is a potential problem for any chapter that is written from multiple perspectives without the characters having any knowledge of what the others have written.
Well...That was a long chapter to go through. There is only one suggestion I have for this chapter. Maybe add in a visual cue when you are switching ponies perspectives.
Now I get to wait and see where we go from here.
This chapter left me very confused, almost like I drank a Cotion of Ponfusion.
So nopony could wrap their minds around how Pinkie can do the things she does? Their minds must be a lot smaller and weaker than I thought. Oh well, I suppose since it is easy to write Pinkie as having these abilities, but not having an explanation for how they work, you would naturally just make it seem as though it would be too complex for anyone's understanding.
I mean, according to the things we have discovered about reality, we know that there are some things that are theoretically possible that seem crazy, even if we could never do them. For example, it is theoretically possible to twist all of the time that made up the life of Adolf Hitler's life into a pretzel. I mean, twisting time itself into goofy shapes sounds crazy, right? But it is possible according to the nature of space and time that we understand.
while I love this story, I want to continue reading it on here, and with all honesty, every time there is an update from this, I squee and read until I'm done. very well done on this chapter, Ilook forward to the next
The first Volume.
I can not wait for the next volume is coming out.
3190956 I try to do so by adding an extra space between paragraphs when they switch, but the site does not allow me to use the original fonts that each pony would use. It frustrates me.
WOW! Deadpool! That is hilarious!
Loved the different perspective on James leaving. Quick question BTW will you ever go back to the Rarity version of this story?
Oh man a new chapter nice! i was kinda confused why you posted this chapter but then soon realized that it was a (forgotten chapter of sorts) but ether way man the feels! the feels they hurt so much!
and i love how enthusiastic you are with your chapters man 45k works! im lovin it!
and you are printing these! holy smokes i would love to have a copy! would be the best book yet! what would your pricing be?
And as always... Cant wait for the next chapter!
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WOOOHOOOOOOO! An update
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Technically they're omnivores. Especially since they're eating fried eggs... and cakes... which eggs go into... and Pinkie has mentioned a hotdog-eating contest.
Holy hell man why would you do that to my feels!?
I've noticed that you had a version of this up, looks like a well revised chapter of your earlier try. Now my weekends are full of writing my own stories, one for this site and one for fun, I haven't published them yet( on a site) I can rightfully say that this brony community has inspired me to write as well as try my best at a novel. I have a basic map for both built but keep on flopping ideas for them, making that reason why I don't publish them.
3191360 if i want a copy will i need to pay >.> cos im poorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
before i read i need to know is this a remake of an earlier chapter or is it a chapter inserted into the story
Since it's been a while since I actually last reread this story, I was so confused up to the point of Twilight sending the scroll to James, then I figured out just what was happening. Also, you have officially stabbed my feels in the stomach, and then said sharp weapon curved around and stabbed it a second time, in the everywhere.
3191346 The second volume is underway and follows chapter 14 through 26. Basically the same number of chapters in an average tv show season.
That was fucking depressing...
Yes twilight. The schizophrenia idea works so well seeing as the entire town obviously hallucinated the same, exact, mythical, being.
I hope there is a 4th wall left after I get caught with this story.
One of the saddest chapters in a story ever I a out lost my whit when pinkish broke down (dam atuto fix on kindle)
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I agree here. When switching characters like in this chapter or to brand new scenes (like when you jump the time span of a couple hours), perhaps put a visual cue. Most tend to use a sort of "bar" between the paragraphs, whether made just like "--------------------" or something more elaborate like "///=====================[]====================\\\". Just a suggestion.
YOU!! . . . . . . . I both want to hug you . . . and PUNT you over the edge of the grand canyon for that chapter!
*nearly collapses from reading all the current chapters up to and including this one.... only to continue on*
So much feels....and damn that was a long ass chapter.
I like room temperature pancakes.
GO AWAY COMIC SANS NOBODY LIKES YOU!
Hmm, this smells like discord...
Where did James go?
How much do the volumes cost ?
Actually tapeworms make you feel extremely hungry.
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That's after some hours. Before then you feel like you ate a decent meal, not quit full, but ate a good amount. I got one from a stupid dare when I was younger...got 80$ though
Damn this almost made me cry.
And i almost never cry.
>Ready to go on vacation with fam
>Around 5 hour trip
>See's word count
OH WELL I FOUND WHAT IM DOING
It was painful to read how hurt they all were
took me 2 days to read this
goddamn
"Alright, last chapter before homework..."
*Look at the words count*
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