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HOLY F**K!! This is the first fimfic I've ever read, I thought it was going to become another story that never came! I've read this story at least three times (coming from me, that's a LOT(mostly because I read a lot of different stuff, people shouldn't take my lack of re-reads personally))! I don't even know who you are (personally, your avatar is clearly posted), but I am completely sincere when I say that you are solely responsible for my becoming a brony.
YOU ARE AMAZING!
~Lonelydarkness
P.S. I read this on fanfiction first.
P.P.S. YOU KICK FLANK!
3679566 LOL, I appreciate the praise. And thank you for enjoying it so far. If you have time, I would love to hear your opinion on what the highlights of the story have been thus far.
3679574 God, it's been so long (I'd gladly re-read it though)! But of all the things you've done, I liked the re-introduction of Nightmare Moon (it's been done a LOT (talk about whipping a dead horse...), but you did it quite well). She felt infinitely more three-dimensional than the original fim made her (not that it was all that hard, but still).
Though if you want a more austere review, I'd have to re-read it (Give me a day). But if you ever wanted or needed a second opinion, DO NOT hesitate to ask.
And as a parting sentiment, MERRY CHRISTMAS... OR HAPPY HOLIDAYS (I really don't celebrate any of them, so...)!
Feel free to PM me at any time, 'cause you're best author!
~Lonelydarkness
3679603 All right then. I'll be waiting.
3679629
YAY!
Very nice as usual! Will there be something with Nightmare Moon? She seemed to be jealous when James mentioned marriage...
3679684 All I can say is wait and see.
3679705 The Crystal Empire will return as planned in the sequel, though it will not follow Season 3 and onward step for step.
And yes, I did try to make to make Trixie's return quite different while also hinting at the route she would take in Season 3 had she not received a push in the right direction from an understanding soul.
I must say, this was a giggling, interesting, and most of all, enjoyable chapter. I especially enjoyed the scene created by Rainbow with the guards. While mildly disturbing, I find it too laughable. "Ah, hay no!"
This was a very entertaining chapter, dude. Can't wait for the next one.
Yes! A new chapter!
A new chapter?!
IT'S A CHRISTMAS MIRACLE!!
What's this? An update! Truly a grand christmas present! Thank you oh so much Humanity!
I shall begin the reading post haste!
Very nice chapter as always, although the joke about Pinkies "Pinkie Powers" (for lack of a better term) being brought up and then dropped again has gotten a bit old, unless you actually plan on elaborating on them. (which I doubt, seeing as it probably won't add much to the storyline)
You updated! But is it you? How do I know you're not a spy?
Hmmm... CHECKLIST TIME!
1) Length: Yep. It's long. XD
2) Time it took to read it (for me, yes that's a thing): Took me about half an hour to an hour.... Yep. That's right. (Do I mind? HELL NO! I love your work.)
3) Content: Same main character, same style of writing, same people in same positions...... Yeps.
Yeah. It's Humanity's work alright. Glad to have ya back buddy! I missed ya!
I find it odd that James is worried about making the girl he has sex with uncomfortable by watching her streatch in the bed they share, right after implying that they would have sex that night.
In the start, you wrote loser instead of closer.
Anyways, it was a great chapter! Nice length, well written and great use of Trixie!
It took me a while to read, but luckily for me I had a long ride today. So reading this was a great way to make 1 1/2 hour in car seem shorter.
Happy holiday and happy new year!
3685178 Fluttershy was not in the mood and is unconditionally shy at almost all times.
wait. What?
That was all the way back in chapter "From bud to Bloom"
James you fool!
I see what you did there.
But can flames?
3680580 May I ask what you loved most in this one? I completed it a week before, but withheld it until Christmas as a gift for the readers.
3679987 Did you enjoy it?
3692928 If I may ask, what is it about this story that makes it stand out as the best fanfiction period you have ever read?
I'm sorry for asking this of you. Reading detailed reviews makes me happy and tonight has been hard on me.
Yet another stupendous chapter of this amazing story. Keep up the good work and happy holidays. :)
3697281 Thank you. May I ask what the highlights of this one were to you?
3697343
The highlights of this chapter for me was the fun conversations at Sugarcube corner, when Trixie was honest with everypony, the story of her earlier years and the illusions. When you write it's just pure magic.
3680638 Did you enjoy it?
Pretty harsh bro
3700843 That was a typo. It happens to every writer.
3701053 I know, it's called a joke.
3689417 I loved the exposition, the banter, everything.
3733795 To each their own
I absolutely love your stories and hope that standards stay this high for the rest of your writing.
3734516 I will certainly do my best to try to maintain these standards for the following chapters and sequel.
3689114 That guess about Fluttershy and Scootaloo being potentially related was inspired by this surprisingly sad comic I stumbled across.
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But seeing how their color schemes are within the same color range with the only exception being the hues and shades, I am honestly amazed I never once speculated that possibility ages ago.
3684273 Yeah, it felt good to finally get back to writing about current events instead of a past one. I was really looking forward to getting this one out.
May I ask what really stood out in the chapter for you, if that's OK?
3756468
I don't know.... It just felt a little.... off.....
By that, I mean it felt as though something's not right versus how I've seen things portrayed in the past......
That could be me just being a derp , which it normally tends to be. Although, I should explain what I mean.
Fluttershy..... Dunzo. I don't know why, she just feels..... off.... Like as if that's not her sorta off....
Again, could be me being a derp , and most likely is..... But I could be wrong and am cuing in on some sorta future thing.
Again though, I'm saying it's me derping out, I did read a changeling fanfic right before I read this.
It would be cool, though, for James to properly encounter changelings. It would be interesting to see your take on them. Some people see changelings as a species and think (like I like to) that changelings have multiple hives that work under different rules (such as in the Fanfic "A Novel Tale"). Maybe it's not like that though. I don't know. All I know is that I'm probably being a derp about it after reading "A Novel Tale". Oh well.
Still would be nice to see it though (considering Chrysalis did show up for all of five seconds, I think. I can't remember).
3700410 So sorry for the late reply, my time with a computer has been scarce of late. Anyway. It was pretty darn good. i enjoyed trixies return (i've always liked her as a character despite her... shall we say, flaws?) That prank though! let's just say i got a good laugh. Keep up the great work, and i can't wait for the next chapter.
Oh im glad that there was a new chapter! also i dont think you ever explained what happened to philomena after Celesta left her there in the care of James.
3772320 she likely came back for her later, like she probably planned in the show.
3734333 If you think it's really worth your time, then sure.
3784837
Where is it said?
3784844
Watch The Best Night Ever at the end season 1
Twilght turns four white mice into horses(sort of).
3784866
I have nothing to say. You win.
3784928 Not abuse them? Hate begets hate, and violence begets violence.
3785784 You mean to do and say nothing while she continues her assault?
3788879
Knew I spelt that wrong.
And also, you can probably marry more than 1 person. (I'm actually fairly sure that this has happened before. Probably)
3788848
not really
Let's see... Pony nipples, and too much rushing. Seems small? But the latter made this done for me. I didn't like it, stopped when I finished From Bud To Bloom. Good effort, just not good material.
>>Read on and find out.
Don't...stop...
3815627 I won't. Still have three more volumes and a sequel to write after the next two chapters.