A long forgotten element has been brought back, but for better or for worse?
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Not too shabby of a chapter, but a few spelling errors. The only part I really didn't like was with jet set and his wife, do you honestly think they would be stupid enough to attack him in front of royalty? The answer: No. Keep on the good writing though.
4600002 It is well documented in various forms of media that the decadent and overprivileged, especially in bygone eras, did not take well to criticism or being called out by those of a much lower social class than them and would often retaliate rather harshly, though probably partially due to not being used to receiving such scorn since they likely do not mingle with the 'ragamuffins' and also wanting to keep those they deemed as being below them in their place. The prideful and arrogant are usually the quickest to anger. Jet Set would not be likely to try to kill James, but was likely trying to inflict a scar on him as a permanent reminder of what happens when he talks back to those who are socially superior to him.
Stupid enough to attack him in front of royalty? Of course not. Offended/pissed off enough to attack him in front of royalty? Very likely.
Bravo as always, Humanity. Though, bringing up Sunny Town, you gotta wonder... what if they aren't just being blissful of their sin? There are times when people wholeheartedly believe in their own delusions... what if they invade Ponyville during the night and get their revenge not only on James but on all of Ponyville next? They have an army of the undead in that forest... Invading equestria is impossible, but Ponyville would just take a few hours....
I think this because the last pony they killed was Ruby. No other ponies died since then with the exception of the residents if you catch my drift.
What if he becomes desperate and paranoid enough to leave the Sunny Town and attack Ponyville?
-yawns- damn you for making such an addictive story. I saw the update and had to read it all in one sitting. That was midnight when I started ( I'm Scottish) its now 4:30am as I post this comment. But otherwise, an immaculate chapter as always, Spending a day with the princesses, wonderful, but telling off Jet Set and Upper Crust, absolutely priceless. Hysterical and heart warming. Keep up the spectacular work.
Well, now that was something you don't see everyday. You talking down some noble prick. I gotta say, that's very satisfying indeed. You finally get a little payback.
And what's this: little miss Prince Bluecunt tries to walk up and talk smack-shit to you as well. Me and NM don't think so.
Oh my, Tia manages to speak her mind out about the Nobility and their 'way of life'. Nice work.
All and all, you had a great day with them in [Corrupted]. I guess it's not ALL that bad, but I still want to burn it all to a cinder, just to show how much hatred I have for it and it's population.
And now, what would come of Discord. I know they say he's trapped, but that doesn't mean he can't hear you. Not to mention he is also known as the 'Changer of Ways'.
Also, Tia really needs to do something about that nephew of hers. Or else I'll discipline him, or give him to NM to carry out the long overdue deed of punishment. Seriously even I wouldn't let the likes of him go around and tarnish everything I have striven to build. Nope! I won't have any of that bullshit running amuck in my royal family!
Anyway, that new human they thought about bringing... You think that he/she might be able to help out with The Lord of Chaos?
Plus, I want that Armour you got....
4600835 In the last sentence, did you mean Gray Hoof?
And I never thought about that. I'll consider it. Although if it will happen anywhere, it will be in the sequel.
And thank you. May I ask what stood out in this chapter to you?
4601724
Careful what you wish for, mate. You just might get it.
fucking long chapters my brain is going to blow up by the end of this
but yay update
If you lived in SA I can tell you that living in suburbs like Elizabeth and Sulsbury can give u a bad reputation
4601872 Not much stood out. All the ponies are in character as well. Though, the noble pointing a knife at an *ahem* "underling" and equestria of all places, that was an unexpected turn of events.
I'm honesty surprised that the princesses or James weren't like "oh shit, the elements aren't bound to you anymore"
Another excellent chapter, it's horrible to say but this just leaves me wanting spook much more. I'll be waiting for your next piece. :-)
4600672 Narcissism in it's purest of forms. Only way to deal with that type is a choke slam.
4601872 Also, yeah. I was talking about Gray Hoof in the last sentence.
Some people do sometimes believe in their own lies and would go to great lengths to end the lives they deem "unworthy". Just as Sunny Town would believe in Cutie Marks being a curse.
4602750 Wanting you spook much more? Huh?
What stood out to you in this chapter? I really wanted to get this one finished fast so I could move onto the next one.
4602742 What are you talking about? The Elements of Harmony are still bound to the ones who used them to seal him the second time.
4602711 Considering that 7th President of the United States Andrew Jackson got a saber slash to the face as a child by telling off a British Major officer who likely was not from a peasant family, it does not seem that unlikely.
Lol was "soooo much more" damn auto correct. Any way I really enjoy the double meaning behind so many of the dialogues. Knowing the pull of NM towards him and even the subtle way he sees the princesses as more than just the titles. There is just so much going on. A lot of stories I have read have a main purpose but yours goes off in so many little directions that it allows one to really feel connected to the character. So yeah I'll be anticipating your next chapter greatly. Lol after rereading my comment I see I jump all over the place, let's just say I like all of it. :-)
4603454 I'm actually going to put off working on my novel for one more chapter so I can get this next chapter out quicker since I've been planning it out for so long and really want to get started.
Fair warning. There is nothing I can say that can prepare you for it.
That both worries and excited me! :)
4603444 Good point... even in Equestria, that seemingly non-existent darkness still lingers. However, it's hold on Equestria is very weak, therefore not enough to lead them into the temptations earth has gone through. I guess that's why villian's such as the FORMER villian Nightmare Moon, the troublemaker draques, Discord, and the power-hungry love-leech Queen Chrysalis are such a rarity in Equestria, but good reminders that there is no such thing as the perfect paradise.
Nightmare Moon is reformed in the story, Discord was also reformed in the show but still encased in stone in your story... yet, I have the feeling that Chrysalis is far from redemption and is clearly bent on conquest for Equestria.
Other than that, looking forward to your next seemingly endless chapter.
4603441 Oh so this is after season 2?
4606270 Read the story's description.
>>Humanity (Evil laughter inserted) Oh.... James, YOU should know me by now; that whatever I say is true.
So saying 'be careful what you wish for, you just might get it'. Well, I'm always counting on such a thing, call me an insane demonic monster if you must. None of it matters, the Nobles have been sitting on their imaginative, so-called, high and mighty thrones in blissful ignorances. They need to be taught a lesson: that anyone and/or anything can come walk up to them and knock 'em down on their sloppy fat-asses, and spit shitfuck in their faces! While the poor deluded fools wail in their humiliation and embarrassment, they will all be damned to stay where they have been forced to.
And there you have it, I shall have them all feel the insufferable fate I have in store for the whimpering weak-minded souls.
Now, if you'll excuse me, I have a lot more planning still, for...
PROJECT: Nobility Imminent Demise!
BURN IN HELL YOU WORTHLESS PIECES OF SHITFUCKERS!!!!!
4606422 Yeah I just forgot after the 700k words :/
That was awesome! And finally some discord. Also will there be a new adventure full of death drama action and suspense?
3 says it took to finish but I did it, and it was amazing, and long
So just to be clear, Discord is already sealed by the mane six. Right?
4609890 The events of Season 2 occurred before this, so yes.
Will tis be the first, or secodn time Discord gets out in recent history, as in Grey Twilight needs help remembering, so theres a tie in for James? then theres redemption, which is Fluttershy based, given James is ther also.. Hmm.
Offensive so called Nobles are asking for a full tax audit to be suddenly required just too late for teh current tax year leading to missed payments etc?
Intrested Wonderbolts are still very intrested.
YAY! New chapter of my favourite fanfic is out! Hopefully this Discord storyline won't be too similar to the one in the fic you're letting me write based off this story. After all, I would hate to scrap a perfectly good Chryscord shipping
4618823 Probably won't come anywhere close.
Any words of critique for this update?
4618882 I like it quite a bit! I'm still confused about if the whole lightning magic thing in the Skyrim dreams had any significance, but nevertheless this chapter does its job very well. I'm glad to see that the next storyline is set up, and I had a hunch it would involve Discord. I'm also interested to see if you're going to do anything with how he was reformed in later episodes of the series. I'm super psyched for where this is going!
8/10 on this chapter, nothing too special but a great way to transition into the next arc.
4618902 This story will not go that way at all and there is nothing I can say that will prepare you for it.
4619025 Well that's ominous.
Now we just have to wait another year and a half for another chapter! :P
It's always well worth the wait for one of these!
Just finished the chapter, I love the bit in the last paragraph about where he would dream. At first I didn't get Pop Star, but then I realized it was a Kirby reference and it made me have a nostalgia. Anyways, I stand by my 8/10 rating, and I am looking forward to where this is going!
Rather enjoyable once again as always, and I have to agree with James and Princess Celestia, the Canterlot elite need to have their attitudes readjusted quite a bit, hopefully those who heard her voice her disdain take it seriously.
Then again I do not hold high hopes on that occurring, but at least the foundation has been laid.
Hope Fluttershy gets better soon!
4633673 That is exactly where that line came from.
...What bank account is this debit card supposed to be linked to? The one on Earth? A trust/account Luna & Celestia set up for him?
It was ludicrous enough when he bought Rarity's bracelet with it way back when, but one could handwave it as him inadvertently stealing it by it not properly paying for it. But this?
Also, "decades" before another attempt to bring in another human? You really are going out of your way to keep James the only human in this whole friggin story, aren't you? It'd probably help build up humanity's reputation if he'd actually go out into the world instead of sitting on his hands in one small city. But then again, he'd just keep up his misanthropic scare tactics to prevent anyone else from even wanting another human. And it'd distract from his slice of filler liferstyle where he's building a "not" harem that he showers with his bizzare way of "sharing his love, with no plans on actually doing anything about it and is pretty much stringing them along but since they know this its apparently okay" business.
Isn't a big part of building friendships between species in fiction not holding a whole race/species to your own cultural standards? Cuz James always is quick to throw his people under the bus in favor of his perfect ponies, which you've shown to not be perfect at all.
Fire IS plasma. Lightning is ALSO plasma. Fire being created by a conversion of energies and lightning by a sudden rebalance of polar energies. Celestias is a form of self-sustaining nuclear fission.
They're ALL plasma based energies
...I have read this before... What happened to it?
“Big fat juicy ones, little… Uh… How did the rest of that song go?”
This is it:
Little,fuzzy ones
Thick long slimy ones
Fuzzy,puzzy,uzzy wuzzy WORMS!
Quoted from "The Christmas Lunch Incident" The Vicar of Dibley!
4600835 Smart idea! OOECK!!
The answer is Discord
Tallon IV?! Was that a 40k reference?
7021059 Metroid Prime, actually. The first one, without Dark Samus.
Actually...
I guess how that spell works is by blocking off the fractions from the planet and then creating a fraction source, possibly directional, above her. Or in whatever direction she wants the gravity to change to. I actually thought about something similar that Ian could do with his alderine energy, creating a sheet or barrier of anti-gravitons to block off the natural gravitons and then forming a artificial source or just bombarding it with directional gravitons from the direction he wants to pull it in. A gravity based form of levitation if the barrier encases the object with the artificial source inside the barrier, or just anti-gravity if the source comes from outside the the barrier with the barrier only blocking in the direction of the natural source.
Skyrim, Metroid Prime, and I have no clue. Those first two are pretty good, well, no, actually they are some of my favorite games. I have no clue, however, I have no clue about. I like all the Prime games, but I have only ever played Prime and Prime III: Corruption. And I haven't completed them yet. I only ever played Corription to the first boss in the tutorial area. I have played the original Metroid Prime up to around the point of getting the wave beam. As for Skyrim, although I've never beaten it, I've had some fun times in it. Like shouting a companion off a cliff. Or floating down a river and looking off to the distance and seeing a completely randomly spawned dragon attacking a fort, and then coming into the fort to find every defender dead. At least I think I went to the fort. I might have just ran after seeing the second, dragon appear. Or that one time when I had been playing a new game without saving and I angered an entire castle (the first one you go to. I don't remember which one because there are a couple that sound the same) and then it automated, literally not even a second before the final blow to my face killed me. And so I had to time my use of the last button perfectly because every time it reloaded, I immediately died. I tried everything to not due, but nothing worked. I eventually just gave up and started another new game. Oh and there was this one time when I started the game and discovered the disk was scratched. That was one my less happy memories of that game.
And it reminds me of Tron:Evolution and that reminds me if when they shut down the Homefront servers. A shame, I loved that games multiplayer. I remember being the last alive, hiding in a bush, just sniping almost everybody on the enemy team when a tank rolled up right next to the bush I was sniping out of. It didn't even notice me. It stopped, looked around, almost scared me enough to come out of hiding, and then moved on. Albeit I didn't win that match, but that was one of the most exciting matches I've ever played.
And now I'm reminded if when I learned they shut down PlayStation Home. I still remember doing dolphin races with my dolphin. I miss that dolphin. And I remember, well, honestly I have too many good memories of PlayStation Home to name just a few. I was really sad to hear that they had shut it down. I understand they had a new generation of console to work on, but they could have at least switched generations instead of shouting it down completely! Literally the only thing I didn't like was the long loading times. That was literally the only thing. So many memories.
Anyway, I don't know why you would read this, but if you did, congratulations. You just read through three extremely long paragraphs of a person reminiscing on games be used to play and doing nothing even slightly related to the story or MLP in general. Congratulations, you get a cookie. If I had the means to give you one... I don't, just so you know. Even if I did, it would be an internet cookie. Unless you have a cookie printer and can tell me what to do to send you a cookie schematic... A ridiculous idea that someone needs to invent because I am seventeen and no one would listen to my ideas. I would buy one if I had money. Custom cookies without having to go to a store or without having to order them online. And I am getting completely off topic- if there was a topic in the first place- and starting off on a tangent about cookie printers. I am a very strange person. I take pride in that fact. Being normal means being an idiot. Not saying normal people are idiots, saying that normal people deny that they are idiots. I, on the other hand, accept that I am an idiot and move on. Everybody's an idiot, some less or more than others, and I am no exception. I like to think I am in the more foam (foam Grammarly? Really? I meant to say than, not foam.) category. I am a complete retard (no offense, I would never use it like that. I may be socially unlearned and idiotic, but at least I have the sense to not use disorders and mental illness as a joke, insult, or other-thing-that-I-forgot-the-name-of-and-am-not-sure-whether-it-really-exists) socially.
I am going to stop now. I'm bored.
Just one question, between which MLP FiM episodes does The Lost Element take place?