For best results, copy and paste this chapter in Microsoft Word and change the font to Comic Sans MS for Pinkie Pie, MV Boli for Rainbow Dash, Batang for Applejack, and Gabriola for Fluttershy.

Also, does anyone know how to change the order of the chapters?

another great one! thanks much for brightening my day!
that ending though... feels everywhere!

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The only way I can think of reordering chapters is to copy and past every chapter into a separate word document, delete all the chapters after the one you want to put the new one in, then copy and paste the other chapters back in as new chapters.

Time consuming it may be but it's the only way I believe.
Hopefully helpful? <:D

aww, I was hoping for the continuation unto the next chapter, aw well, great chapter never the lessdl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra2.png

*sees the idea I wrote about in the comments a few months back come to life*

Übersquee

Now to read it!

*edit* Having done this chapter from the POV of the ponies was a nice idea; I honestly didn't expect that. I was honestly expecting Twilight's POV to pop up, but I'm sure you had your reasons.

You are in a world of trouble, long lady. I’ll be sure to mention this to Princess Celestia as well.”

... long lady? is it supposed to be lke that

Ahh. An update from my favorite story. something I was looking foward to. Some what confused at the beganing at the sudden scean change but other than that it is good...

...however you might want to fix this.

“You are in a world of trouble, long lady. I’ll be sure to mention this to Princess Celestia as well.”

Long Lady? Wut?

An awesome job as always.

awesome stor keep it up

Very happy to see continuing updates to this story, seeing the 'on hiatus' tag had me worried for a bit. Glad to see you've got the creative juices flowing again, wouldn't want to see one of the best H.I.E stories out there stop abruptly.

YAY! update!

It appears your editor has taken a vacation.

This is the first time I think I've noticed errors in this story. :(

Anyway; grammar Nazism aside, this was an interesting update. It's nice to see things from the other characters' points of view.

Awesome job, man! I especially love the part where they confronted Diamond Tiara for her notorious deeds, and how Fluttershy got her for that. Keep it up!

1611391 It's a reflex issue. I think I am typing something else, but my fingers hit different keys to spell something different. That, and I was writing with different fonts for each character. Gabriola is pretty small.

1611329 Thanks. What did you enjoy most?

1611081 I have no idea how that got there.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_TwilightWut.png Fixed it though.

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honestly i think you did a good representation of Fluttershy snapping. I mean it is really hard to have a loved one up and leave and then your super pissed at the one that made them leave... honestly she handled it a lot better than i would.

Also, I spotted a minor error in Diamond Tiara's interrogation:

“What?! Then…nothing with happen?! Darn it! I’ll just have to think of something else…”

You probably meant to type "will" instead of "with"...

1612012 Thanks. If you can, please give me a full list of errors.

1612056 Here's what I've found. I put the misspelled words in bold:

“He is still very dear to me. And I want to see him brought home as soon as possibly.”

possibly should be possible

I waked over to Fluttershy and laid my hoof on her shoulder.

waked should be walked

If you want to read what happened today, you can keeping reading.

keeping should be keep

Aaaaaaaaaah! Chronology has been murdered!!!!!!

1612109 Sorry, but I couldn't find a way to move it back down the list to where it should be. Is there a way? Not having that choice seems a bit restrictive for a site like this.

1612099 Ok, thanks. Please let me know if you find more.

Aside from that, whose POV did you enjoy the most?dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Pinkie_Pie_lolface.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Rainbow_Dash_lolface.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Applejack_lolface.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Fluttershy_lolface.png

1612351 Probably Dash's. Each had their own charm to them.

Also, I found one more!

while closing inspecting the bracelet

closing chould be closely

Is this like a repeat chapter? or at least a side story? Probably. whatever. Once I realized it was a repeat chapter I kinda raged and stopped reading.

1612343 I dunno I've never written any fanfiction...

Im about 40% sure this story was marked on hiatus but I was scrolling fast and theres no way to get to a story that ive favorited but has no chaptrrs marked undread (im on my phone is why and its definatly not set up for mobile as typing in this I cant edit my comments without backspacing a whole lot and I cant read what ive typed until its posted

1612446 wow...... Ill try and remember to come back later on my computer and fix that

1612386 It's not a repeat. It's the events of A Forest of Sorrows shown from the eyes of the Mane Six. James was not in Ponyville during the chapter, so this chronicles what happened in his absence.

Well this was a bit disruptive to the order, but anyways it was great to see what was happening while James was hiding out in Everfree Forest. I always enjoy reading a story from multiple points of view.

One of the few HiE I can actually read through. Although I'm curious as to how you will continue this one. Not many loose ends to fill (or are there...?)

I loved this chapter even if it was from previous events, are we going to see a chapter from Rarity's POV? :)

1613406 Yes, with the next trip to the past. But what did you enjoy so far? And do you know if it's possible to rearrange the chapters?

I actually like how you've given us a different perspective of this while he was in the forest. Allows us to actually picture what the mane 6 were doing and how they worried and such! :D

1611081 Sorry about that. I suppose the change in font made it harder to notice the typos. Aside from those, what did you enjoy about it?

So this is what the girls been doing after they found out James was gone, great chapter as always, keep it up!

Im not sure how long exactly this has been posted for :P I have spotted a few errors Its okay I know you mean well.... (sorry if I'm repeating errors, I read abit into the story and didn't want to refresh and lose my place)
Also: SPOILERS BELOW just incase you havn't read the chapter yet.
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I growled, “Don’t you dare act like you did anything wrong, you little witch. We know what you did.” when talking to Diamond Tiara in school, maybe you meant to say "Don't you dare act like you did nothing wrong, you little witch.

2nd - Twilight then glared at Diamond Tiara, who looked way too scared to say anything with Fluttershy still up in her face. “You are in a world of trouble, long lady. I’ll be sure to mention this to Princess Celestia as well.” Young lady?

3rd - I’m looking at the other side of my bed. No one is there… It feels so lonely to be sleeping in my bed alone after sleeping with the man I love more than once. I know he is safe right now, but…
Maybe you meant "man I've loved more than once." ? I'm not sure.. Just throwing it there

Whether or not this was of any help, nice chapter and, though I believe I speak for many a brony here, we were hoping for more continuation on the story, this was still just as interesting as the rest Keep up the good work

EDIT~~~ Just incase you want to check it out *https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/85926* <--- ignore the asterisk's
It's just an interesting blog post by another author/writer about doing the Apple family accents. I thought I'd drop it here just incase

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....so nothing new...

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I actually enjoyed how different each point of view of the Mane Six was DEAD ON, personality wise. I actually don't know how to re arrange the chapters, like I told ya before, the reason I joined here in the first place, was because at the time the hackers deactivated your DA Account, sorry. :(

1620759 Glad you liked it. I used it as an exercise to get inside the Mane Six's heads.

What were your favorite parts, if any?dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Derpy_Hooves.png

1642489 Well, it would delve into Twilight getting a crash course in love for starters,e.deviantart.com/emoticons/moods/love/lust.gif dealing with Nightmare Moon differently, and the eventual wedding day that I strongly suspect would once again be targeted by Chrysalis.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/lolface_Queen_Chrysalis.png As for the rest, I am not sure.

1644251 Probably. Considering that Equestria is all about love and tolerance.

Found another error:

" I have to admit, that book looked reeealy"

I get that Pinkie is stretching the word to emphasize its age, but at the very least, there should be a second L in the word.

1664179 Read the latest chapter after reading the 8th chapter. That's the real 9th chapter.

As of now, I am going to reread the entire story! And also as of now, I will include a signature Bow-Chicka-Honk-Honk, even if there was nothing to provoke that response, all because I like my character!
Bow-Chicka-Honk-Honk!

It's a pretty good story and I've enjoyed it so far but... I'd just like you to know that because of you I have new-found hatred of the phrase 'but I digress'.

1693875 Unsure at this point, especially since the arc I have in mind ends with a wedding in Canterlot.

1695360 My apologies on that.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Fluttershy.png

Aside from that one grievance, what have you been enjoying about it so far?

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You better be damn sorry, I can't use the word digress without wanting to tear some of my hair out... XD I guess it's just one of those things that sticks out to me.

While I'm not a fan of "clop" per se, I am a fan of good writing and a little romance doesn't hurt. My personal opinions aside on how you've made the plot turn out so far (I'm a pretty biased guy); I like the way you've expressed the characters for the most part and your descriptions are nice and easy to visualize. As well as that, it seems your character has taken a different turn from the way most human characters are written, which I find to be refreshing, even if I find them to be somewhat of a cynical "pansy" (excuse my profanity ). Don't get me wrong though, I'm not criticizing him, I'm just being my good ol' subjective self (guess I couldn't put it aside). Like I said, I've found it to be pretty refreshing and find your style of writing to be interesting, I did spend quite a bit of time reading it but I... I di- *vomits* Sorry... I couldn't seem to finish that without vomiting, wonder what's gotten into me?

Seriously though, pros:
Good style of writing
Refreshing character personality
Good sense of detail
Large chapters

Cons (Keep in mind these are terribly subjective for the most part):
I don't like the way certain things turned out, so I'mma secretly whine about it in my corner of shame.
DIGRESS
I don't especially like the protagonist too much
DIGRESS
*Insert complaint I couldn't think of here*
OH MY GOD DIGRESS

So yeah, as you can tell, I'm a smart alec. But I really have enjoyed it so far and look forward to future chapters.

1724900 I don't think he'll play a particularly large role in this story, but I can try.