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You and everyone else this time of year. Always something going around that knocks everyone on their ass. Was lucky this year. Only got bronchitis this time.
Hope you feel better.
Great chapter. It's nice to see Fluttershy and Dusk bond over due to taking care of the CMC as they seem to be quite the hassle. I also love how you are giving characterization to the Diamond Dogs as most of the time they are portrayed as just idiots, but you give Spot and Rovee their own personalities, especially the way that Spot is submissive due to being a runt yet is also willing to help out. Zecora and Big Mac's moment was sweet and it was funny to see RD and AJ land on their asses due to their inexperienced in armored combat. Overall, I loved the chapter.
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How else are you going to ensure repeat business? Maybe she's in cahoots with Bon Bon!
7996183 haha. Thanks for the concern. Life goes on regardless of illness but yeah I do feel quite a bit better these days. Cheers and thanks for reading on!
7996237 Thanks. Making the diamond dogs work is a fun challange. I think you'll like the twist when it comes out in the nedt part. As for Mac and Zecora, I gotta set up hearts and hoves day somehow As for AJ and Dash, the weight of armor is something they gotta deal with someday.
8004963 Haha. Minuet will return someday, but with a better cover story. Shame sometimes cover stories have to be made in a rush. *innocent whistling*
8005112 Rabble rouser
Finally caught up...
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8026138 There a a ton of things the girls are just starting to get Dusk interested in. Parties in his pants are one of them.
And with the herd forming around him, Dusk will never have the time to truely be bored again.
Sorry for the slow response btw.
8038174 opps my bad. I'll try to get up another four or five chapters asap so you don't get bored!
8099080 Well, thank you for giving the story a shot. You're obvisly allowed your opinions on the characters and quality of writing so I'm glad i was able to catch your attention. Lyra is going to be a ongoing background character, offering support during specific story lines.
I don't know about 'virtue signaling' or the like. I just wanted to include a different kind of character in a universe that is already suffering from a massive issue of sexual and societal issues due to the population issues.
Regardless, feel free to keep reading, and hopefully you'll get past Lyra's existence, hopefully even find the character interesting if I'm able to ever get to the point of the story where they come back into focus. But if it puts you off reading any more, that's life. Good luck.
Somewhere here you missed the closing tag for italics, I think.