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Okay I love this chapter. Gotta say that there was a lot of character development. It was interesting to hear the story of how Celestia and Luna attained their marks and to find out that Dusk's magic is sealed away. It's also interesting to learn that Cadance is Celestia's granddaughter and that one of her parents is Celestia's kid. I do feel curious as to how the Crystal Empire reacted when Celestia and Luna managed to overcome the spell that prevented Starswirl and his group from rising the sun and the moonl. Still, that raises inquires like who is the Wolf and why was Luna so unstable about the "bad hair day"? Philomena was an interesting character as despite her weak condition she's one cool old lady that gets along smashingly with Barb and friendly banters with Celestia on a regular basis. This also was quite teasing when it comes to couples (I'm a little disappointed that there wasn't a fully-shown scene between Rarity and Bronze), but it shows great character development. Flitter and Cloudchaser have finally admitted their feelings for Thunderland by revealing how concerned they were about his injuries and Thunderlane ended his section with
Irving a guy's fantasy of fun times with twin sisters. Zecora managed to comfort Big Mac about the situation with Braeburn while Mac acknowledges Zecora as one of the family. It's also sweet that Lyra feels conflicted about keeping secrets from Bon Bon yet is also loving enough to intimately comfort her to make her feel better. The Rarity/Bronze section was amongst my favorite as it answered inquires I had about herd dynamics from how most here's are actually equal-rights to permission to date exclusively mares and only admit mares into the herd that have a reciprocal love with Dusk Shine. I also admit that Rarity's section is the most sensual as she knows how to tease Bronze yet is also loving and warm enough to answer her questions and bring comfort to her insecurities. I'll be honest, I feel disappointed that Rarity's treatment with Bronze wasn't shown. Still, this chapter was one of the best Inread in terms of character development, so I'm greatly satisfied with it. Hope to see the next chapter soon and learn what episode is next.
7277417 Thank you ver much for all he feedback. Bronze and Rarity? One of my editors is considering doing a one off of their sex scene. We shall see if this comes to pass, haha.
What's next? Sonic Rainboom, my friend.
7274353 I must say, I'm intrigued by the "minor incest" part of the description, and what it could possibly means... Is it introducing incestuous desires, but doing nothing about it? I suppose I'll just have to read to find out... *gulp*
That, is a serious sized chapter, with here and there, to and fro, so much world building you could at first think it was a Depression. Dusks magic being sealed is a shout to McFlurrys lockdown, as that spell is a Starswirl.Big Macs Meteorite Hammer would be I assume a shout to the picture of excelent detail posted online some while ago?
Philomena is old, and responds to Barbs healing fire, but is called Mortal. Is this ebecause she only has the one go at life, even though Phoenix means reincarnation from the personal remains instead of another birth elsewhere in this case? Or will it just end with Barb and or Celestia having to power the funeral pyre?
7278766 I think it was stated in an earlier chapter that very little is known about phoenixes or their lifespans. Celestial and Philomena may not even know that Philomena will reincarnate from the ashes or however Psi decides to do he death bit
Ah, and the mystery of Dusk increases ever so slightly ~
The subject of Dusk's power and what it means, plus the far-in-the-future appearance of Tirek are perhaps the two greatest elements of the story I'm looking forward to. :)
Onwards to the Best Young Flyers competition!
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McFlurry's lockdown? and what about Big Mac's hammer? Depression?
7281550 I'm having some problems reading between the lines as well, but I think the McFlurry is referencing the spell Sunburst found to limit Flurry Heart's magic at the Crystalling. I dunno that Psi has seen that one. I'm guessing there's a pic being passed around for the hammer; I don't know where Psi got the inspiration for that but the name comes from my desire to make terrible puns and druidic references. Depression... got nothing. A reference to how much infrastructure work was done to end the Great Depression?
7278353 The "minor incest" comes up at some point, much later in the series. A lot of side and background events come up. Just how incest it is depends deeply on people's concept on the issue. I'll put it as 'extended'.
7278766 Yeah, it got really out of hand, HAHA. Can I ask what you mean by McFlurry's Lockdown? Mac's hammer? Unrelated with anything else mostly. Just a kinda cool idea that I had lingering around in the back of my head.
I love how well my Philomena arc is working out. Don't worry, I have plans for how Birds of a feather goes, but hopefully I've given enough hints on how it will end!
7278995 Correct!
7279798 Dusk's mystery is always such a joy to develop. I just can't wait to get to the end of the main arc I really enjoyed Tirek's first appearance. I can't wait to be able to bring him back.
Onwards to the Best Young Flyers competition, and greatness!
7294577 "Pinkie Apple Pie" or "Hearthswarmers"?
7294605 Yes and more!
7294643 In that case, depending on if Equestria works like Earth, they are too genetically distant for a union to be considered incest, if you consider their (possible) connection is as distant as it is; no country would consider it such, as they are as related as any given human in a city, statistically speaking.
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Thou shalt count to three and three shalt be the number of the counting. Thou shalt not count to two unless thy then proceed to three. Four shalt thy not count to, and five is right out.
You Are Correct.
Finally caught up on this story and I must say I find it rather unique. I like how the events of the show are retold with a more serious and dramatic twist.
Also, I recall the topic of Celestia's children coming up but I don't recall anything on Luna's. Could there be descendants of Luna's blood living unknown? Could this include Dusk?
7302426 First, thanks! I was going for exactly that mature retelling. Obviously there will be show episodes that will not make the transition, but my goal is to bring over everything I can as best as I can.
Luna's children? There was only one or two specifically mentioned, Polaris during Interlude 2 and more hints during Interlude 6. Glad you're enjoying it, I can't wait to bring you more!
7303817 Thank you! I'm glad you're liking it so far! I can't wait to hear more from you as you read on!
who the fuck types she like shi why god
7356784 Because it's a way of identifying a trans or futa character extremely quickly.
7356866 yeah. Humanized, with wings, horns and tails, a massive inequality in the sexes, nearing a 10 to 1 ratio, and a society heavily altered by their respective culture and history.
7359347 Haha. Moondancer will return, but sadly not for some time, sorry. No plans for lemon yet, but you'll see Minuette soon.
7360105 The phrase "I have plans" will come up a lot but trust me here. I. Have. Plans.
7360110 Thanks for your respones...they answered some of my confusion...Though, I don't know why it didn't show up on notice.
7361969 yeah, I don't know whh some of the notices never send. Glad I could help, and happy that your still reading! I always love to talk with readers!
7362134 Haha. I call disagreements like that part of the 'Alternative Universe Clause'.
7362331 Haha. More a friend of Shining's click,bbut Dusk knewmost of them soo yeah, fare enough. Haha
7362532 Horse words are great :3
7362503 I think it's subtly implied if he has been there for 1500 years, he probably isn't very easy to kill And if it isn't my bad!
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7365427 Haha. I've been playing the new Doom the last two weeks or so, really been enjoying the heck out of how the put so much story into the game so subtly. A real joy.
As for the shadows and the darkness? So much to come, but it's fantastic to see your thoughts. Poor Trixie.
7362592 Forgot to mentioned but nothing a "magical" HF Blade named Murasama can't kill.
Evidenced by its ability to kill "magical" "Nano-machine, Son!" Arms Strong.
Let's see you try to survive when your molecules and atoms are being shook loose. While your magic is being disrupted by the energy coursing through the blade.
And yeah! The new Doom is awsome.
I would like to think of him as the original Doom Guy who got an upgrade and then got entombed somewhere down the line. Even if some people don't think so.
7365924 eh. The story implies he is doom guy or doom 3 guy. So whaever. Its fun!
7368088 It's really fucked up to be honest. Bullies exist for both adults and children, yet so many pretend it's a childhood only issue.
7368626 Oh ho...bullies for adults have different names depend on the culture and language.
7369114 and hopefully I avoided the worst of it haha.
7370721 A few, mild. I swear... honest? Pinkie Swear??!
For the sweet romantic moments.
And this is a theme for Dusk...
Theme for the Alicorns.
Though, personally, I like this most.
7423529 the amount of surprise almost made me sick...or maybe it was that TWIST on words
7432350 Haha. Don't worry, I have plans for more related to the hydra to come in Part 2 relating to that. Sonic Rainboom Part 1 is finished, pending final edits, hopefully it'll be up sometime today!