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Of course Scootaloo is cute. Scootaloo is best filly after all.
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How can anyone say no to her?
This chapter was awesome. Watching Dusk reprimand AJ and RD for how their excessive competitiveness hurt Scootaloo was awesome and established him as a Papa Wolf. The race scene was also very entertaining in the way RD, AJ, Bulk, and Lyra dropped the leaves with athletic movements. The side effects of the Poison Joke are more serious given what happened to Bronze, but it also served to introduce Zecora and allowed Dusk to confront Bronze about her feelings. AJ really matured in this episode by learning to let go of her jealousy involving the other mares' attraction to Dusk and the scene of Dusk trusting RD with the budget and helping her design her home was very cute. The Dash/Dusk scene is the cutest scene with Dusk you've wrote so far in my opinion. Finally, Zecora's characterization was awesome. She was charitable enough to assist Bronze, wise enough to give advice to Dusk regarding his trust issues, and confident enough to showcase her body due to her status as a High Priestess that worships Celestia. Storyline-wise, this is one of the best chapters in the story. I hope to see the interlude with our resident Mailmare soon.
6042456 well thank you very much. Don't worry, Scoots wasn't hurt just a little dirty and disappointed in her hero. Glad you're loving it. Zecora was a ***** to write properly, like, harder than Pinkie.
That's right, we're not the kinds of people who do things like have Zecora rhyme only a couple times, have her not rhyme at all, or use mcguffins intricately tied with story arcs a hundred chapters in the future to make things easier like in Diaries of a Madman... no... we suffer through it. We go the extra mile.
If she ends a sentence with orange, do we do the same genius joke that Mr Unsmiley used in his story Man About Town? NO, we just tie in the word door-hinge and make it work... somehow. Do we put our tails between our legs just because it's hard to make epic speeches? No, we do what the awesome people who work on the rewrite of Turnabout Storm do and make it work! Because that's the kind of can-do attitude you'll get here in the land of Dusk Shine's Saga...
PS, we do not know if she thinks in haikus.
6042751 haikus? Only on holy days, or days that are divisible by twos.
Puff, puff, wheeze, wheeze, SPLAT.
Groan. The trawling of the story is almost as exhausting as the Running of the Leaves, when you have to stick with the crowd so you dont accidentally run them over.
So far? a very intresting collections of variations on theme, attampts, to me, of trying to come up with coherency in those variations worthy of praise.
I take it that Zecora needing a lot of warming up, with Dusks intrest in Black Lotus will lead to the mixture of Lotus, Joke, Verdunta (?) and Hearts Desire, leading to maybe not Smarty Pants having Want It Need it, but Zecora, or even Dusk? Also giving the problem with runaway Lust, breeding Greed, with Barb(arella) turning Ginormica, and ending up with Rarity having to give her Mistress Toy Box secret to Dusk so he can magic up a Toy worthy of Barbarella?
Or am I getting the series totally mixed up 8(.
Fluttershy and Iron Will, will be sooo intresting. Maybe the poor thing is doing confidence talks, because he suffers from a certain medical disorder that turns out Zecora can help with, in potion, lotion, and, training? That, and Aloe and Lotus.
6049016 I do love comments. Comments are a fantastic delight, and it's even better when people make exciting and smart comments or even suggest concepts.
Here is my gift in return: Flutteryshy and Iron Will is a flashback. Mummm I love the feverish contemplation even just whispering that inspires.
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Rarity:Fluttershy dear, youve been a Very naughty pet in not informing me about your, aquaintance, with Iron Will, so I arranged for a selection of very special toys from my supplier in Canterlot, and Zecora here has agreed to help with the, lubrication. Now, what do you say pet?
Flutteshy:
6042522 You have trouble writing Pinkie? I haven't noticed.
6042751 Aren't you laying it on just a liiiiiiitle bit thick? And not everyone will know what stories you are talking about.
6049016 Zecora helping Iron Will? Have you seen or heard this?
6053843 Man about Town? No. Turnabout Storm? That's one of the more popular crossover fan-labors outside of Fallout Equestria (On an unrelated note, it has good character development with The GREAT, and POWERFUL, TRRRRRRIXIE in it). Diaries of a Madman???... That's actually the longest fic on this site, as well as one of the more popular HiE fics (But honestly, I'd recommend Tales of the Oppressed or Man of War in its stead). But yeah, seeing as how there's millions (Hundreds of thousands? I don't know.) of fics out there, i's not entirely unreasonable that some people wouldn't recognize them.
And also... laying it thick is what I do. You want a Kid's Meal? Too bad, you get a Triple Decker! Unless of course it's a serious matter, then I shall attend to it with the proper level of attention it requires.
PS: The instant you said this, I just KNEW it was going to be THAT (The original battles are better, in my opinion, rather than a simple re-dubbing with the use of other ERBoH's). It was one of the first I watched, and I loved every second.
6053928 *signs*
Man About Town? I never heard of. Turnabout Storm? I never heard of it until you mentioned it. Fallout Equestria? What's that? Diaries of a Madman? I have no clue. Tales of the Oppressed? Is that like Tales of Symphonia? Man of War? Is that a crossover with that PS game?
For the most part, I don't read stories that contain Gore, Crossovers, nor HiE (until recently, and even then, only clops). Everyone is entitled to their own opinion. And, yes, I also like the original ERB's, but I also like a number of the MLP rap battles, dubbed and new lyrics.
Now can we just get along.
6053982 don't worry Frankie. I hadn't heard about 9/10ths of the titles before starting to write and being told of other stories.
Yes, I worry endlessly about missusing Pinkie and this worry I under use her.
ERB? Some of them are great but nany are hitor miss for me. Really love the weird al cameo
6053982 Er... I meant no offense, dude. Can't WE just get along?... Oh, right, you already asked that question. Sure, why not? It's certainly better than actively trying to make someone's life harder than it needs to be, in my opinion.
Now, to answer your questions:
It's a humanized ship fic involving Spike and countless others (A bit on the parody-ish side)
vignette2.wikia.nocookie.net/memebases-my-little-brony/images/e/e0/Objection.png/revision/latest?cb=20140123035541 ... Oh, it's a crossover between MLP and Phoenix Wright: Ace Attorney.
It's some kind of thing made by this person that's sparked lots of praise for it's similarities to the Fallout series. It's kind of like Lunaverse (Which centers around the New Lunar Republic) and whatnot.
Imagine a story that has lots of potential, great comedic writing, and a diverse mythos... and have it all RUINED by a main character's decisions, character development from those decisions, among other things.
Is that the RPG where you draw your own maps?... Ah, must be thinking of something else. Anyway, just take what I said earlier, except it's better: The main character come to terms with his poorly thought-out decisions and GROWS as a result... however slowly.
Nope, it's its own property. It involves a human that comes into the future into Equestria with a twist: The human came from a time that was already post-apocalyptic!
Now that all that's out of the way, let's be friends
6054193 Etrian Odyssey is the ds/3ds series about dungeon crawling and map drawing. Its epic.
6054246 *claps* Yes. THAT'S the one.
6060163 I wont lie, I am hinting at a lot of things in this story. But remember that these things take time, so keep your dreams alive and maybe someday, if you wish upon a star, you'll see things you never dreamed of.
Pony catnip. You'd think that'd be a very popular drug. But I like that this one turned out to be poison joke. I've definitely been looking forward to your interpretation of this one. Every bad thought you've ever had? Boy, but Dusk's ideas were refreshingly light.
"I don’t know how a herd could work with so many mares." Really? Isn't the ration of male to female 1:4 at least? And you offhandedly mentioned that one guy with 8 mares.
It really is silly to go nude when you're not used to how cold it is, but it was silly how Dusk was looking more at her tattoos than her boobies, yet still he seems smitten. I'm worried the guy might get too many ladies as that's a thing I often hate in harem stories.
Did you get help with the rhymes, because that was amazing?
(Besides, you don't even have a retaining pool, and besides!) You say besides twice in the same sentence.
All in all, a rather impressive feat the way you managed to combine these two episodes.
This was different...
At least they now have a witch doctor.
I think I missed it but when did they fix his horn