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I loved this chapter. The discussions about Cadence's talent as a nurse when dealing with disease shows a lot of thought was pit into it. RD shows more of her bond with Dusk by displaying her attraction towards him. The characterization of Opal is interesting, as I expected her to be more selfish rather than dedicated to Rarity and Sweetie. Overall, this is a great chapter and I thank you for your permission to read it.
5101717 No problem at all. If you think Opal's got a fun twist, I can't wait to see how you handle my alterations to Apple Bucking Season . I tried to make sure everything builds towards our major growing plot lines. Thanks for your read and I can't wait to update you with ever more plot
5101730 Haha, plot. Toilet humor, immature but can brighten up your day.
This is turning out well. And I can guess who the 'beast' is that Luna is referring to, but I won't say in case it spoils anything. Keep up the good work, and I hope for another update soon.
5101990 Your welcome, and thanks! Apple Bucking Season should be a shorter chapter but I hate to even say that because I am really good at getting carried away and doubling the size of chapters as I go
5144560 aww. I'm sorry. What part was it?
5144581 waaaay back during the nightmare moon incident. I ended up having to pretty much skip both those chapters to keep myself vested in the story.
5152364 huh. Well whatever works. If you ever feel able to try them again it would be helpful for me to know what parts specifically made it difficult to understand and I'll try to get another edit / rewrite done to improve them. But I'm just glad you were able too get into it again! Thanks for the feedback and take care!
5160717 Haha. I understand, I often use my phone for watching / reading shit as well. I plan to keep Dusk as mortal as possible. The fact he will have a herd will hopefully feel justified and realistic for the setting. I will try to include names as often as possible and in advance to keep the confusion down!
5192617 thanks Wabbit! Yeah i had to take edits from comments for the first few chapters as I didn't get anyone serous about editing until chapter 2 or so. I've got one more shift tonight then three days off so maybe when i finish chapter 5 and am waiting for edits from Frankie I'll try and comb through the first few chapters again and see if I can find more errors. Gpad you're liking it so far and hope you find it only gets better! I always appreciate any and all comments even if it's just to say wtf???
5195794 replied via pm! Thanks for your help!!
5231183 Thanks! Me and Wrabbit are almost done doing a fresh edit of chapter 1. Hopefully it wont be too much longer on the revised version. Thanks for reading and leaving feedback!
5231996 yeah! My goal with interludes is to tell storys that do not take place in the cannon at all. Lots of the chapters will be greatly altered from the shows narrative but the interludes are all unique.
5238951 I try!
oh you just know that sunset is gonna reappear with a vengence on dusk and have ass handled to her by the girls
5274430 Hahaha. Don't worry friend. I have plans. So many many plans.
5278420 Thanks! I haven't read more then one chapter of The Unexpected, but I hope I'm telling a unique and fun story all its own! And I hope I characterized Rarity's interest in Dusk deeper then just 'big town boy, gotta fuck!!!' haha
5279334 I'm glad you are enjoying it! And don't worry. Fluttershy will hqve her day!
5278730 Yeah, you did, actually. It's one of those romances that sprout from the initial encounter, but grow as time goes on, personalities are explored, and events that just seem to happen draw the two closer (kind of like Kazuya and Satellizer's relationship in Freezing). Good luck with writing your story :)
5279812 She always does. Whether it's an awesome fanfic like A New Hero, an episode like Hurricane Fluttershy, a final stand in Smile HD (she still should have won, though.), or popularity as a character, Fluttershy will ALWAYS have her day !!
I have to say, Scootaloo's story arc has been interesting. I didn't see some of the stuff coming, or even the stuff similarly related to the first stuff, but as for the way it turned out, it was awesome!
5283411 Haha thanks. I don't want to sound like a broken clock but I'll repeat myself here anyways! "Don't worry. I have plans."
Plans for almost everything. And even plans for things that people don't expect kinda like the characters you pointed out in other comments. And plans for plans. And Scootaloo is a lot of fun. And more!
And you can thank my idea man, ShadowThunder for helping me develop Angel Bunny. He has already provided me with great ideas for Angel's future appearances
5283745 OK at the end of the second part of princess of love, you stated that it marks the end of season 1, is that true, and also do you plan to go by your own version of the shows time plot, cuz I really don't want to see this story end so soon cuz its the most well put together dush shine love life story so far.
and also it already been a month..............so will there be a chapter before or after thanksgiving, feel aggravated by this if you want cuz I know I sound selfish
5285700 Hahaha. No no. It was the last of the interlude's of season 1 that I had planed out at the time is all. Season 1 will be at least 27 or so chapters long excluding the interludes I have planed. Three more interludes, one after Griffion Brush off, one after Boast Busters, and the next one I have planned is after Call of the Cutie.
If you want more info on why I'm sucking at the next chapter, check my blogs as they are heavily related to my story, but basically whats going on right now is that me and Wrabbit are editing the old chapters and are currently on Chapter 2 at the moment. At the same time, me and Frankie are working on Apple Bucking Season. I've had a lot of writers block as well and so am currently working on both apple bucking season and concepts for other chapters to try and break my writers block.
All and all I am disappointed with myself and my own lack of progress with the chapters but It's fantastic to get so much feedback of late.
its so weird. it seems lately all of my favorite writers are having writer's block at the same time. I mean if your going to update the story but one chapter each at a slow rate, possibly make it each month. so will each re-edit be posted as re-edit on this when the come and also how are the other chapters going?
5299218 great progress this weekend! God another 4-5k into chapter 5 and me and Wrabbit are almost done chapter 2s reedit. It will go live as soon as he is done with it and thankfully chapter 3 is smaller so it wont take as long.
so where was shining armor when dusk was in his abusive relationship back then? being the big caring brother that he is portrayed he would have at least talk to dusk about it.
5306395 What I was trying to imply / express is that up until Dusk's last night with her, nobody but Barb ever saw through her mirage of being Celestia's perfect student. Dusk himself was fooled by it all until the "accident" during the magic duel and like an abused spouse he was convinced that it was just an accident. Thus Shining Armor never heard about it, except in the long run, when Dusk talked to Cadence and him about it sometime after her disappearance.
5306619 Come on Psi, you're my buddy. More story please?
5311939 I'm trying. I've made a lot of progress this week. But I would really like to wait for Wrabbit to catch up before I post it so you guys don't have to suffer through my random mistakes. I might release it after I finish it if Frankie thinks its good enough, but no promises.
5312010 sounds good. Our prologue is finally done if you wanted to read it
So is the cutie mark on both the neck and the butt? I'm kinda annoyed with myself to ask this because other people asking me anatomical questions like these always annoy me.
Oh, I hope you deviate from the Canterlot wedding episode canon.
I expected Rainbow to be reluctant at first after finding out about Scoots condition, but dang I feel bad for whatever experience she's witnessed.
I can also do an impression of myself.
Also, more Sweetie Belle misspellings.