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6955175 haha. I goofed and forgot to fix that when i reloaded good catch.
This chapter was great. It's unusual to see Dash so nervous, but I really liked how she bonded with Bronze. I also found it funny how Scootaloo accidentally flustered Bronze and Rarity's reaction to RD's haircut. Thanks for the great chapter.
6955715 No problem at all! This was all meant as set up for Feeling Pinkie Keen / Sonic Rainboom, but I got carried away so changed it into an interlude. Thanks for reading!
Theres no trails with the Wonderbolts Entrance Trials? In this case, are they like the weather team, Red Arrows, carrying ejectors, or is it only when they are the peak of flight magic ability that the wing edge bleed off becomes visible?
If this is the Suprise Visit, I take it Dash will end up having to use that rather high calibre weapon she somehow has in defense of her freinds?
6955842 Only Alicorns and the very best of pegasi flyers leave a trail behind naturally when they fly at the very limit of their speed, leaving hints of magic behind due to friction on their natural magic aura. This will come up later. Thus the use of a magical item to fake a trail left behind by a flyer is considered bad taste at the very least.
Weapon? No, I think you misunderstand haha. Surprise is Pinkie's cousin, she appeared last during the Dragonshy arc as a Senor Cadet for the Wonderbolt's, demoted due to her part of the ongoing prank war between the Wonderbolt Cadet's and Royal Guard. Or did I misunderstand your meaning?
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Ah, I apologise for the misunderstanding, I most likely lost count of which Cloudsdale episode I was thinking of with Dashs freinds turning up unanounced.
6955903 I totally understand!
I really like how open and affectionate they are in this world. It just adds to the feeling that this is a place I wish I could live. Then again, with my general dislike of others touching me, maybe I wouldn't like it there so much after all.
It might be better to say contentment, but I'm not really certain on that.
down can be taken out
Dash has nipple piercings... I guess that fits her youthful rebellion thing, but I still don't really know how to feel about it.
Nothing wrong with this one. Just letting you know I like it so much I'm probably going to steal it at some point.
Huh. Guess the cloud walking spell won't be so easy this time around... I write these as I read, so now I'm making a pouty face at you challenging my predictions. Scoots running around like that was cute.
I should conclude with the fact that I always feel so relaxed after reading this story.
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I feel like I should remind you that Pinkie also has nipple piercings. Also thought it was funny you seem to have reservations about her piercings but not her Tank Girl-esque new haircut.
6961487 Hair grows back. Nipple piercings are piercings of the nipples. I don't care for needles in general, but why there?
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Ahhh. I get you, I have a huge issue with knife's and needles so I understand what you mean now.
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I totally understand what you mean about the openness, but at the same time, i agree, unwelcome physical contact is a huge thing that bugs me.
You don't want to know how many extra passes shawkthorian put in to try preventing you from finding an error. Good eyes man!
They are a very sensitive spot to have piercings, but understanding your meaning now after what you explained above. It is a hit/miss erotic thing.
6962223 For the record, I actually have a good ear, rather than eye. My own reading is too slow for my liking, so I'm using Natural Reader. With it, I've been gorging myself on fics from all my favorite sites at an unprecedented rate.
6962235 Ohhhh. That does sound like a good idea. I should try that for rereading and editing my old chapters as I find my eye jumpsnover the text when editing filling the gaps in where I've messed up and not registering that their is an issue.
6962238 Also, with Dinky joining the crusaders, Dusk herding with AJ and Rarity but also studding for Derpy, and the relationships with Apple Bloom and Sweetie, it leaves me with one question. Is it incest to do it with your adopted sibling? Because with this tangled web you've created, it seems that question's going to become really relevant really soon.
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Incestuous relationships aren't really looked down on in this society. Already came across at least one that I can think of offhand - though I guess we haven't seen them in a few chapters.
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6968000 Expanding on that, I suggest looking into Aloe and Lotus' character profile here. While I haven't go into much detail on the incest laws in this world [There are basically none, but it is frowned on by some groups like the Canterlot Nobles.] it's implied that at one time incest was even more common because of the major disparity in the sexes.
I do plan for this to come up more later.
6968096 Interesting. So there should be no qualms with Apple Bloom hitching up with her niece, step sister, and probably half sister at some point. I'm just gonna sit in my recliner and watch the fun unfold.
Fan of Tamora Pierce's work?