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I just gotta say, it makes my day whenever I get a notification that you've updated this story. Thanks for keeping on!
Got to say that this chapter was interesting. Watching Dusk socialize with Amethyst and Derpy about the studding contract served to show the expansion of his social skills. His conversation with Lyra about developing a training routine for him and the girls is exciting with the possibility of the girls fighting enemies in the future. Rumble's crush on Bronze and his successful completion of Dash's course was adorable to watch (BTW, is the rust smell that Rumble detected signs that Dusk deflowered Bronze?). Lastly, the session with Shy and Rarity was hot. I wondered where Rarity learned the skills to be a Madame and Fluttershy's excitement when treating a bound Dusk (even though maybe it was her heat) along with her puppy act around Rarity was arousing and adorable. I really hope there are more scenes around the three of them and that Shy learns to take more initiative. Anyway, this chapter was a great read, as usual. Thank you.
6337839 Huh, I thought blood smelled like iron... then again, I'm a lonely bachelor, so how would I know what defloration smells like? In any case, thanks for being such an awesome fan as always.
That nightmare... hmmmm..... I don't think you're setting up for Discord quite yet, it feels just too premature, but something that could be traumatic for Dusk personally? Hmmmm. I'm thinking either "Feeling Pinkie Keen" or "Stare Master" as one has a Hydra fight (plus Dusk's sanity being stretched just short of "Lesson Zero" areas) and the other he gets straight up stoned. All this assuming of course that it isn't an original plot point made up by yourself. Lol
6337731 Thanks for that! I try to keep things exciting, but it's always great to hear back from people!
6337839 More then welcome! I hope to keep building things up!
6338399 No, it's just the smell of the armor she normally wears, that clings to her even when she changes.
6338555 Very good to see you again! Yeah, let's take this as a situation were I say nothing but you can picture me laughing evilly if that helps any!
6339866 I know, just the typical F14m3rz-brand of facetiousness I do from time to time.
Very nice description of a possible way of interacting with the clouds to get them to do specific effects.
I wonder if Dusk should start carrying Shinings old dice bag? Roll percentile to see if he has concieved, roll D6 to see if its male? Yes, I know someone made an almond nut torpedo shaped three sided die, but D6 is the standard.
Poor Harry, having to deal with a removed from house Angel bunny. Maybe we should feed Angel a Timberwolf? I mean, twigs and wood is nothing against rodent teeth that can go through light metals and concrete and wear through steeel.
If Lyra is the face of local ops, makes you wonder just how many of the assistant background maintenance ponies are subordinants?
6339873 Haha. No I thought you were teasing the poor guys with your inside knowledge
6339924 Thanks! The clouds thing was a flash of inspiration!
Haha. Nah Dusk is a nerd, but not that big of a nerd.
Harry and Angel will be a part of part 3! Don't worry, he's had a good nap and can't wait to get up... right Fluttershy?
Local ops?! I have no clue what your talking about! She is a school teacher, and nothing more! No she never took steroids! I don't care if you have evidence!
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Oh I'm always around somewhere....
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Huh. I think Dusk's personality gives him the unique ability to talk about his sperm so clinically with a mare he intends to give it to. Hilarious. Also interesting how Amethyst seems to be using sex as a reward for all Dusk as done for Derpy, with the potential for a foal seemingly as a secondary priority. Although, I suppose low sperm count is a decent excuse to not knock up his herd too much. However, I still hold that, in four years, there's just no conceivable way he won't conceive even once. It's not a question of if, but who. Personally, I'd like it to be Rarity, as his lead, or Fluttershy, as she seems built for it already. AJ would be next on the list, and probably Pinkie after what I assume to be a very touching Baby Cakes. Rainbow would be dead last. I no longer dislike her, but she's still my least favorite.
I don't think the quotations were necessary there. Also, look what I learned to do!
Bound and blindfolded on the first time? Damn. I can't help but wonder how Barb would react to this side of her crush.
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It's strange how pet play seems so fitting for Fluttershy. Her timid nature pleads for someone to take charge, which is where Rarity comes in. It also makes sense how her reservations disappear only after Dusk is bound, how she gets to be the master for once, or at least the beta, only to panic at the first sign of something new. Shame it stopped so quickly though. Maybe she's not mom material just yet.
Dash didn't make the first rainboom? Damn you and your compelling set ups. Same goes for the nightmare.
Wouldn't that be THIS year?
"She" being spelled as "shi" is very distracting.
What the heck is a Child of Evening Rose